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6/8/22, 2:41 AM
I feel like this story crossed the rubicon from being BDSM to being what I call a "psycho dom" story. Masters who aren't in control of themselves and their emotions aren't really all that sexy. Certainly not at all compared to masters who are methodical, deliberate, who plan and predict and are firmly in control. This master is substantially less sadistic than in some other stories, but because he's like a child in his behavior and sort of retarded when it comes to understanding how his slave is going to react to the things he does, he doesn't come across as a BDSM master just an abusive boyfriend. If that's your intent for the story, that's fine, but as I said it's not very sexy.
Danny pup
6/8/22, 2:41 AM
Woof , very hot cant wait for next chapter
Mike Davis
6/8/22, 2:39 AM
Oh, I definitely feel the need, for more, please.
6/3/22, 12:54 AM
I feel sorry for Sammy. Very sorry. That said the sex stuff was hot. Lovedtge rimming and fucking though I wish we had the rimmer's pov. I think it would be amusing if the anal juice had the effect of making the drinker into like a super dom. Hehe But yeah this was fun.

6/8/22, 2:31 AM
@Heru Kane Oh that'd be a fun exercise! The same chapter, but from Mark's POV. I'll consider it :)
Markt
6/8/22, 2:31 AM
Where is Marky? Is lost in 29th
6/8/22, 1:58 AM
An unusual story, but quite erotic. I loved it!
Willie Cici
6/8/22, 1:18 AM
Will definitely be something I look forward to reading!! Keep it going. Loved this one. Will for sure love the next installment.
6/7/22, 10:37 PM
I just got another idea: wrestling turning into sex wrestling, and that means the winner needs to fuck the looser in the ass to win, what do you think?

6/7/22, 10:48 PM
@darkblade2814 I think that would be perfect... for a different story :rofl:

6/7/22, 11:37 PM
@Hypnothrill that is okay, glad you liked
nycboot
6/7/22, 1:44 PM
Just finishing this story now - wow, what a saga. All the scenes with Ray were so hot, particularly his transformation. The only part that feels incomplete is the protagonist, James, the Mortal. After getting revenge on his bullies, it seems that he wanted companionship, or love. The Demon narrator begins to provide that, but then the narrative breaks off to deal with Chaz. If they really were equal, James would have pushed the Demon's hand away and kept kissing. ;) Anyway, a great saga. Thank you!

6/7/22, 10:54 PM
Well @nycboot, aren't you a delight! MisterXIX and I, are so touched by your comment. And, are deeply happy that you enjoyed the story so far... but it’s far from over! The story lives on in our minds and whilst we have a conclusion planned out, our real lives have kept us from delivering the ending we want to. I can't speak for MisterXIX, but I will say whilst we've both been busy, I can't wait until we both have the time, energy and desire to finish our story together, and I'm sure he feels the same!

nycboot
6/7/22, 11:24 PM
@HunkLover @MisterXIX oh! I thought that was the end. So if you're planning more, good going! Keep those creative juices flowing and I patiently look forward to when you can provide more. All the best to both of you!
Iriefal
1/17/22, 9:13 PM
NOOOO, don't finish here. There are only 3 stories that I am truly waiting for their authors to continue. On 1 of them I gave up, as it was about 1 year ago. 1 is few months old, so I still have some hope. This is 3rd one, but by no means last. It was just discovered as last. I love your story, I love character development, and even if it hits almost all my kinks, what I like the most is the prelude of romance between demon and "mortal". BTW here is my personal opinion. Don't change the way main character looks like in the series. Let him be the only one untouched by corruption. Why? 1st, my kink is with smaller boys being dominant, so if you make him hunky and muscular, it will be like about 70% of all stories here. 2nd, another way to showcase character development. You may or may not want to do this, it is your story and I love the way you made it. So please continue and good luck.

6/7/22, 10:57 PM
I promis @Iriefal, this is not the end. What I can't promise is when the next chapter will materialise! I will say that both MisterXIX and I think about our characters and where they're gonna end up fairly regularly and we have a number of idea to conclude this tale, but, real life has got in the way for a while. Be patent, and we'll hopefully satisfy you!