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6/7/22, 1:48 PM
The title is just brilliant! As usual, the slow burn as the world turns that you do so well has kept me riveted and I can't wait for the next part. Looking forward to Reed finding his speedo and meeting up with Parker again.
6/7/22, 1:42 PM
Sounds like this is going to be one of the stories I’d regularly revisit. Can’t wait to see where it goes! Please don’t leave us hanging for too long ;)
6/7/22, 7:15 AM
Tried to snap a photo of this guy at my gym today but there was no good casual way to get a picture... One of the local colleges here has the Eagles as their mascot. This jock guy was working out with one of their team shirts that says "TALONS UP" on the back. As soon as I saw it I thought "Talon Dominus!" Won't even try and say I didn't get chubbed up good remembering this story.
6/7/22, 5:05 AM
Short and concise hot little piece! Loved it!
6/7/22, 4:46 AM
Even though it's the same events as the last chapter, I really appreciate how you manage to make the two perspectives interesting on their own while describing the same storyline. I'll admit I didn't read through every word of this chapter again, knowing already what has happened, but I was focused on understanding how Jonathan was taking in all of his new personality. It's definitely not something readers manage to read often (the sides of the coin), and also not easy to keep it all still interesting. Great stuff so far and continue to look forward to more! :wink:
6/7/22, 4:43 AM
Loved it man. Great building of tension, suspense and climax. I was both hoping the Ben would decline the offer and accept it. Loved the way he looked to his new master to make the decision for him, and the inner wrestle.
6/7/22, 4:22 AM
Awwwww,I really like this. Arthur is a great protag with good ideas. I love how he playes with his men
Anonymous
6/6/22, 4:50 PM
OMG this screams for a sequel! I want to know exactly what happened to Sam and himself!! Awesome story!

Anonymous
6/7/22, 2:41 AM
Thank you!@
6/6/22, 3:00 PM
Fantastic story! With the ambiguous ending (where we don't quite know how much control Randal still holds over Frank), I'd love to see a sequel.

Anonymous
6/7/22, 2:40 AM
Thank you! I honestly hadn’t given any thoughts about what could happen to frank if randal gets loose again. @Hypnothrill
Nutiper
6/7/22, 1:29 AM
This is a *very* fun development — since Ben being sworn into the society means that Chance can't make any more changes to him. But it also means that Chance has just unleashed an artificially-created power bottom with reality-changing powers onto the world, and Ben is in no way beholden to him... I'm looking forward to seeing where you take the next chapter, and what Ben and Chance's dynamic will be like when we see them next! Also, just to call it out: the sex scene between Chance and Ben was cracking me up, and I appreciated it — especially Chance's blunt "no" when Ben offers up the cliched "be gentle with me, Chance!" as Ben speed-runs his transformation into a power bottom. There was something so fun in your approach to the scene, and how you wrote their dynamic. Chance just throwing _all_ caution and subtlety to the wind, to the point of absurdity... Ben, in the meantime, along for the ride but extremely matter-of-fact about it and calling out every moment of weirdness...