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Anonymous
6/7/22, 2:45 PM
Excellent work!!
6/3/22, 1:22 PM
Hot series for sure. I approved both chapters but the way the site works the second one is displayed on the homepage and not the first. Each chapter effectively takes the place of the old one on the homepage.

6/3/22, 2:49 PM
@Norismo makes sense! Next week, I’ll release the first part earlier in the week and the second on Friday. ❤️

6/5/22, 1:54 AM
@Norismo I'd say feel free to re-release it to the home page tomorrow. I'll separate the next two chapters to ensure they don't effectively cancel one another out. Y'all are amazing and I appreciate you allowing each part to get it's own moment of undivided attention despite my shortsightedness :P

Anonymous
6/7/22, 12:56 PM
@EdIam today?

6/7/22, 2:35 PM
I’ll do a last read through tonight to fix my grammar (I tend to make very little sense when I’m writing very horny) and I’ll submit the next chapter afterwards ❤️
6/7/22, 2:02 PM
I’d love to read more. Great start. I love the main character and his older brother relationship.
6/7/22, 1:48 PM
The title is just brilliant! As usual, the slow burn as the world turns that you do so well has kept me riveted and I can't wait for the next part. Looking forward to Reed finding his speedo and meeting up with Parker again.
6/7/22, 1:42 PM
Sounds like this is going to be one of the stories I’d regularly revisit. Can’t wait to see where it goes! Please don’t leave us hanging for too long ;)
6/7/22, 7:15 AM
Tried to snap a photo of this guy at my gym today but there was no good casual way to get a picture... One of the local colleges here has the Eagles as their mascot. This jock guy was working out with one of their team shirts that says "TALONS UP" on the back. As soon as I saw it I thought "Talon Dominus!" Won't even try and say I didn't get chubbed up good remembering this story.
6/7/22, 5:05 AM
Short and concise hot little piece! Loved it!
6/7/22, 4:46 AM
Even though it's the same events as the last chapter, I really appreciate how you manage to make the two perspectives interesting on their own while describing the same storyline. I'll admit I didn't read through every word of this chapter again, knowing already what has happened, but I was focused on understanding how Jonathan was taking in all of his new personality. It's definitely not something readers manage to read often (the sides of the coin), and also not easy to keep it all still interesting. Great stuff so far and continue to look forward to more! :wink:
6/7/22, 4:43 AM
Loved it man. Great building of tension, suspense and climax. I was both hoping the Ben would decline the offer and accept it. Loved the way he looked to his new master to make the decision for him, and the inner wrestle.
6/7/22, 4:22 AM
Awwwww,I really like this. Arthur is a great protag with good ideas. I love how he playes with his men