Recent Comments

6/7/22, 4:46 AM
Even though it's the same events as the last chapter, I really appreciate how you manage to make the two perspectives interesting on their own while describing the same storyline. I'll admit I didn't read through every word of this chapter again, knowing already what has happened, but I was focused on understanding how Jonathan was taking in all of his new personality. It's definitely not something readers manage to read often (the sides of the coin), and also not easy to keep it all still interesting. Great stuff so far and continue to look forward to more! :wink:
6/7/22, 4:43 AM
Loved it man. Great building of tension, suspense and climax. I was both hoping the Ben would decline the offer and accept it. Loved the way he looked to his new master to make the decision for him, and the inner wrestle.
6/7/22, 4:22 AM
Awwwww,I really like this. Arthur is a great protag with good ideas. I love how he playes with his men
Anonymous
6/6/22, 4:50 PM
OMG this screams for a sequel! I want to know exactly what happened to Sam and himself!! Awesome story!

Anonymous
6/7/22, 2:41 AM
Thank you!@
6/6/22, 3:00 PM
Fantastic story! With the ambiguous ending (where we don't quite know how much control Randal still holds over Frank), I'd love to see a sequel.

Anonymous
6/7/22, 2:40 AM
Thank you! I honestly hadn’t given any thoughts about what could happen to frank if randal gets loose again. @Hypnothrill
Nutiper
6/7/22, 1:29 AM
This is a *very* fun development — since Ben being sworn into the society means that Chance can't make any more changes to him. But it also means that Chance has just unleashed an artificially-created power bottom with reality-changing powers onto the world, and Ben is in no way beholden to him... I'm looking forward to seeing where you take the next chapter, and what Ben and Chance's dynamic will be like when we see them next! Also, just to call it out: the sex scene between Chance and Ben was cracking me up, and I appreciated it — especially Chance's blunt "no" when Ben offers up the cliched "be gentle with me, Chance!" as Ben speed-runs his transformation into a power bottom. There was something so fun in your approach to the scene, and how you wrote their dynamic. Chance just throwing _all_ caution and subtlety to the wind, to the point of absurdity... Ben, in the meantime, along for the ride but extremely matter-of-fact about it and calling out every moment of weirdness...
5/14/22, 9:40 PM
Well, **_others_** might not care to know why about things, to delve deeper into the story, but I do. Call it curiosity, call it whatever you want. I think it helps make for a richer story. What I read was fun, make no mistake, but a lot of the times I want more than just a fun JO story.

mcbaer
5/15/22, 6:00 AM
@Papa Werebear In that case I would like to officially assure you that this is indeed intended to be far more than a mere 'fun JO story'. As I've mentioned in the introduction, it's only a part two of a potentially longer framework and the entire thing is being written in mind with the intention of becoming something of a treatise, an in-depth examination of the core ideas behind philosophies such as agrarianism, anarcho-primitivism and deep ecology once finished, so stay tuned :wink:

5/15/22, 8:20 AM
@mcbaer That Is reassuring, I really like background to stories. If you have a plan I am so INTERESTED reading. Thank you so very much for sharing with us all, hugs, Papa Bear

Papa Werebea
5/21/22, 9:31 AM
@Blackrulos91 So... If I don't absolutely love every single aspect of a story then I should keep my mouth shut and say nothing... I see... The only acceptable comments are the ones of abject adoration of the authors work, finding no fault at all in it, in your opinion. Is this what you're saying? You seem to confuse an opinion or critique with an attack on, or dislike of, the author and his work. As it so happens I read and enjoy this particular authors work all the time but, if I make one mild comment about liking some more background to a story, I get a sarcastic response and am vilified for having an opinion. Do note, nowhere did I say I didn't like the story. The truth is I don't leave comments on stories that I truly dislike; I merely move on and forget that I read it other than to remember that I did not like it. So if you are rushing in to defend McBaer, for some perceived attack by yours truly, perhaps you should save it for those really attacking him. I've been a fan of his for years, I have read and reread his works over the years and was one of many who were concerned when no one had seemed to have heard from him in some time. So, unless this particular author says he wants to see no comments from me in the future I shall continue to speak of what I find good or bad about a story, because it's not always just one thing or the other, it can be both. Thank you.

Tgay
6/7/22, 12:55 AM
@mcbaer This will make a great series and I look forward to more daddy transformations.
Anonymous
6/6/22, 11:48 PM
Happy Ending Story is needed. The story should be turn up side down.
Elm
6/6/22, 9:31 PM
Hi there! Just wanted to show you my support again! Hopefully life let's you get back to writing soon, can't wait to see more of my favorite story here!
6/6/22, 9:28 PM
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