Recent Comments

6/5/22, 1:10 PM
Wow. Another great chapter. The sex in this was very hot. I love what Chance did and how he changed Ben. And the guilt he felt about it after makes for a good story. Of course Ben noticed what was going on. It’ll be great to see what Ben does with the power. Hopefully he gives Chance an even bigger dick to fuck him with :)
Chastor
6/5/22, 12:24 PM
I agree, quite a confusing read. Not really sure what's happening. The story is told in third person and keeps saying "he" and it's never clear which character is being referred to.
6/5/22, 11:00 AM
This was great!
6/3/22, 7:40 AM
@little tiny tim I've saved a copy of your edited version which I can send to you as a Word doc or text file if you need a copy. Cheers. Billy

6/3/22, 8:19 PM
@Whitechap_e1 Thank you for your consideration. I'm afraid I'm not that tech. savvy & wouldn't know what to do. As you were kind enough to read my inferior version ,[& save a copy], all I can ask is you send it to Martin requesting[giving your permission], that he publish it as an 'alternative version' by 'Little Tiny Tim' but acknowledging that it is based on your story....Again thank you!

6/4/22, 7:19 AM
@little tiny tim I had in mid to simply email you the text. My email address is displayed at the top of the story drop me a line and send the story across to you. Your version is not 'inferior' to the original it is just drafted differently to fit in with your preferred fetishes and perspective, your vision for the story is every bit as valid as mine. My history is that I came to reading and writing quite late in life, I had an enthusiastic adult literacy teacher who was insistent that it didn't matter what I read or wrote so long as I read and wrote something. My early entires on this site, the 'Possession with Intent' series, were absolutely panned for their poor grammar and spelling mistakes (it was written like it would of been spoken in the part of London where I live), but a couple of other authors responded positively and so I kept going. This site can, at times, feel a bit of a bear-pit, existing authors should support new writers in every way they can, and it is not and never will be my desire to rip into anyone else's work. So please drop me an email and I'll forward your story to you and then you can publish it in your name (I'll add a apargraph at the front to give it my approval).

Martin
6/4/22, 7:22 AM
@little tiny tim Tim, as I've written you by email (have you read it?), I cannot publish a story in your name. You have to do that yourself, otherwise you wouldn't be listed as the author. Just click the "New Story" button on the site's main menu and fill the fields. I've already sent you your story by email.

6/4/22, 7:26 PM
@Martin I really don't mean to be such a pest, but I never received an email copy of my revision of 'This will suit you'...I must have removed it by [my] mistake. I vaguely remember an email with three box's at the bottom [it's probably what your referring to..if all I had to do was check a box, could I respectfully ask you to resend it to me??? As you see I'm not very handy at computer stuff [& it has to be on a first grade level for me to get-it] !!!..If this is all too much for you, I'll understand [as I'm sure your always busy with more important stuff]...but thanks anyway. p.s.: Whitechap has been super nice, a real gentlemen !!!!

6/4/22, 7:46 PM
@Whitechap_e1 THANK YOU!! [You are very kind & thoughtful] :I don't know if I'd even be able to transfer a copy of my revision of your story from my email to the gayspiral site, as I'm totally incompetent at anything but the most basic stuff on the computer, but of course I'd be more than happy to [at least give it a 'try'] & take-you-up on your more than generous offer : my email address is : littletinytim20@gmail.com

Martin
6/5/22, 5:50 AM
@little tiny tim I've sent you another mail in attempt to guide you through the process. Please just answer that email. Thx!
6/3/22, 3:47 PM
I was reading this from Jonathan’s perspective and I reloaded the page and it is hidden now, I guess this one was the intended first version, but now I want to finish Jonathan’s perspective b4 reading this one xD Can I ask when u want to release that one, Edlam?

6/3/22, 5:43 PM
@zeeker8b the other is ready to go, I think Martin is just holding it so this one doesn’t get immediately buried behind it 😁

6/5/22, 5:08 AM
@EdIam i just wonder how long will be holding the publish pf the chapter :thinking: maybe post one on friday and one on sunday? I also saw the two chapters, but when I finish this one and ready to read the next it was gone :S And nlw I chack every few hours for the missing chapter :sweat_smile:

Martin
6/5/22, 5:47 AM
@Math_Reez 💙 It will come online later today (Sunday) :wink:
6/5/22, 5:02 AM
Damn, so hot! So humiliating
Jun 4, 2022
Anonymous
6/5/22, 4:34 AM
Loved it, hope Construction Dad gets a hot story too
6/2/22, 4:39 AM
Ahh, come on, keep it going! The last time I gave you so many ideas for several chapters. And what do you do.. You give up! Quitter ! What are you going to do next, give up on life too ? I guess when things get tough...RUN !

Willie Cici
6/5/22, 2:15 AM
@Vikingforce As I remember, I invited you to take the keyboard and post your novella. To that end, I look forward to your contribution. For now, I will rest and edit the other stories I have written.
abc123
6/5/22, 1:05 AM
Insta Favorite! I literally can't wait for the next chapter!