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6/5/22, 12:00 AM
If you're curious, those pics really are of Burz in all his big grey glory lmao It's old work from years ago, but the artists are [ProllyPrime](https://twitter.com/ProllyPrime) and [Paprika_Boy](https://twitter.com/paprika_boy), go check 'em out! And if you like my stuff, drop by [my twitter page](https://twitter.com/AlokhTorgud) for some of my shorter drabbles alongside [my boyfriend's art](https://twitter.com/AstrumEroticum)!
6/4/22, 11:43 PM
I love reading about this rubber universe. It's sensual and engaging. This is no different. My only concern is that there seems to be a strong focus on these two boys. Ron is clearly the dog and James is the boy, but both are very submissive at heart. Who is going to be the dom? Is Nate with his two collared dad's going to be the one?
6/4/22, 10:23 PM
This is interesting, and hot, but a bit confusing. The rapid POV shifts make it hard to understand, but perhaps that’s the intent?
6/4/22, 8:19 PM
This is phenomenal! Seconding Piko's remarks, it really has the cadence and content of a Greek myth. And what happens to these lads is f'ing HOT!
Anonymous
6/4/22, 3:55 PM
Please continue, & then what happened? You got us all hyped up for the next thing to happen! I hope it will be a series ! So many possibilities! Eagerly waiting next chapters !

6/4/22, 8:01 PM
Thank you for expressing your enthusiasm! Sadly I have been rather busy with work deadlines lately, but I will get a new chapter out as soon as I can. This story has not been forgotten!
Jun 4, 2022
6/4/22, 7:46 PM
Yeah! I want some dude to choose the Leather Daddy option!
6/4/22, 7:33 PM
my goooooodddddd....
Jun 4, 2022
6/4/22, 7:02 PM
Loved it!
Jun 4, 2022
Blue moon under hell
6/4/22, 6:40 PM
Really loved the way the mental changes were shown. Hope we get a second part for construction dad and leather dad soon!
Anonymous
6/4/22, 6:40 PM
Update?… Plz continue this