Not all of have your skill with words!

Enjoying this so much. A buff and slutty superhero that doesn't know his 'weakness'. I hope villains and friends use that. And I hope he enjoys that plug all day!

This is easily my favorite chapter of the franchise so far. I love a hyperdominant Johnathan. Hopefully we get to see him exploit his brothers even more next chapter!

So hot!

I was a bit worried that Jonathan might be turned into a really rough brutal top that might be a bit beyond my like, but I think it turned out to a good balance with him being tough but not downright physically violent. I wonder if there will be more fine tuning of the brothers' behaviours and personalities as Pryer continues working with them all weekend. Another great juicy chapter as usual...especially loved the bits of feet thrown in here and there! Looking forward to the face off with the original cast of Larry and Zach. I'm curious to see how the power struggle will turn out and who will have the upper hand...or maybe some cooperation even...? :wink:

I'm sorry, but I think this ending is a pretty tone deaf take on abusive relationships. David doesn't deserve forgiveness, much less a second chance at love from his victim of abuse. The man did one of the most horrifying, sadistic, monstrous things I can imagine you could do to a human being, and we're expected to believe Danny is willing to brush that off and "kiss him passionately"? Ugh.

This... This... This is the PERFECT ENDING. My GOD. (Lengthy analysis incoming!) I have been eagerly awaiting the conclusion of this story; it is one of the best I have read on this site. And it did NOT disappoint. I appreciate that *everyone* involved in Danny's torture, including the old man who caused the whole mess in the first place, realized just how horrible the situation was and felt guilty. But even more importantly, you don't have a magical moment where Danny is suddenly "cured" and restored. He's been through the greatest traumas imaginable--rape, being robbed of all agency, near-mutilation--and we see the direct results of that trauma: complete psychological destruction, distress, detachment from all emotion, inability to speak...and, like many victims of abuse, even his anger is gone at this point, so he is incapable of caring about anyone or anything, including thoughts of revenge. But best of all is the fact that the story ends ambiguously. I confess I'm not crazy about the old man magically summoning up the good memories Danny has of David--it feels like a touch more of mental manipulation, but hey, that's this site's bread and butter--but even that is not enough to make Danny forgive him for what he had done. It's possible that the gap between them will be truly insurmountable, and they'll break up. Or maybe they will, over a very long time, gradually fix things. But we don't know, and making that the ending is the perfect choice. And finally, Danny, despite all he has gone through, proves that *he* is the strongest and kindest person in the story by far--because he didn't become as cruel and monstrous as his tormentors even when given the opportunity to do so. That is not to say that victims of abuse should ALLOW abuse--I hate the narrative of "you're strong for putting up with it." Danny's trauma didn't make him strong, it nearly destroyed his entire life. Danny himself is the one who chooses to maintain goodness after seeing the very depths of humanity's depravity. That takes more strength than any bully or dictator could ever have. JorgeJog, I say this with all sincerity: you are an amazing writer. Well done.

Hot! Look forward to part 2. Hope one of them ends up a big strongman in a tight singlet or tights with no hair, just big gleaming smooth muscles!

Read on the tube today. Had to hide my hardon and wet patch. Amazing chapter. You are a legend EdIam

Still an old fave. 🥰