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6/4/22, 4:45 PM
I'm really excited to read more of this series!
6/4/22, 2:49 PM
Guys, thank you very much for your comments. I am new to these sites but I have several stories, mostly about slavery, that I will be posting, especially in Gay collar stories or Gay kinky stories. I already have several episodes of one, Betrayed and enslaved, in Gay collar stories. If you like the way I write, I would love for you to keep reading my stories. Hugs
6/4/22, 2:09 PM
Very well written and I love where the story is going. I’m rooting for Brandon!bv

6/4/22, 2:45 PM
@SlaveBoyJG Thank you very much. It's really nice to have some feedback!
6/4/22, 1:28 PM
Loving this so much. I think it’s only fair that Officer Adams get up on stage to be publicly humiliated by the thong fags.
Boomer
6/4/22, 1:09 PM
Just perfect
6/4/22, 9:41 AM
I wanted to say thank you for ending this story in the way you have, I agree with the ambiguity at the end being a positive. I will say its been a long time since I've had a story effect me as strongly as this one did. Some stories stick with you cause they're hot or sad or poignant or make you smile. I genuinely would have flashes of the last chapter come back to me and felt revulsion and anger! This is a good thing for a writer, to get that visceral a reaction is rare and hard to manufacture. For the reader it can make people switch off and run or wait for the outcome praying it gets better in some way. Huge risk but huge reward. Truly well written and a brilliant piece in its own right! I think the bit that effected me most was the combination of David 'turning to the dark side' and seeing it through Danny's eyes, realising as the reader Danny still had hope and love for him, right up until that moment. I keep visualising the scene of the 'don't you need to piss too?' over and over and its traumatic and visceral. Horrifically wonderfully written. I do think I need to go read something sweet and loving now though 🤣🤣
Anonymous
6/4/22, 3:05 AM
Another amazing chapter…. The suspense for the anniversary to end and mom and dad to return and learn their fate is crazy!!!!
Buck
6/4/22, 12:45 AM
Good idea, but the lead up is much longer than the tf and mc bits. Maybe go back in and extend that section, slow down the process of getting dressed and really get in his head.

Anonymous
6/4/22, 2:31 AM
@Buck agreed ;) u rushed through the best part! Great built though.
gdlosh13@gmail.com
6/4/22, 2:30 AM
Totally hot. I can't wait to read more.
Willie Cici
6/4/22, 2:24 AM
So hot!!! Great start. Can't wait to see where this goes.