This... This... This is the PERFECT ENDING. My GOD. (Lengthy analysis incoming!) I have been eagerly awaiting the conclusion of this story; it is one of the best I have read on this site. And it did NOT disappoint. I appreciate that *everyone* involved in Danny's torture, including the old man who caused the whole mess in the first place, realized just how horrible the situation was and felt guilty. But even more importantly, you don't have a magical moment where Danny is suddenly "cured" and restored. He's been through the greatest traumas imaginable--rape, being robbed of all agency, near-mutilation--and we see the direct results of that trauma: complete psychological destruction, distress, detachment from all emotion, inability to speak...and, like many victims of abuse, even his anger is gone at this point, so he is incapable of caring about anyone or anything, including thoughts of revenge. But best of all is the fact that the story ends ambiguously. I confess I'm not crazy about the old man magically summoning up the good memories Danny has of David--it feels like a touch more of mental manipulation, but hey, that's this site's bread and butter--but even that is not enough to make Danny forgive him for what he had done. It's possible that the gap between them will be truly insurmountable, and they'll break up. Or maybe they will, over a very long time, gradually fix things. But we don't know, and making that the ending is the perfect choice. And finally, Danny, despite all he has gone through, proves that *he* is the strongest and kindest person in the story by far--because he didn't become as cruel and monstrous as his tormentors even when given the opportunity to do so. That is not to say that victims of abuse should ALLOW abuse--I hate the narrative of "you're strong for putting up with it." Danny's trauma didn't make him strong, it nearly destroyed his entire life. Danny himself is the one who chooses to maintain goodness after seeing the very depths of humanity's depravity. That takes more strength than any bully or dictator could ever have. JorgeJog, I say this with all sincerity: you are an amazing writer. Well done.

Hot! Look forward to part 2. Hope one of them ends up a big strongman in a tight singlet or tights with no hair, just big gleaming smooth muscles!

Read on the tube today. Had to hide my hardon and wet patch. Amazing chapter. You are a legend EdIam

Still an old fave. 🥰

another great chapter , can't wait for nest one , i loved the inclusion of others in stories . hope we see more people lucky knew when he was Adams

Hot!!

As expected, the wait was worthy :3 I knew Mr.Pryer will take Jonathan immediately, but never thought it will be this way :O amazing work! An instant new favorite for me :blue_heart: :blue_heart: :blue_heart:

Wow. Just… wow. I’m literally speechless at how good this was. Even the vore was hot, and I’m not even into vore. You’re so ridiculously good at writing.

Pa clearly knows what matters and manners are important! Can't wait to see what he has to teach the boys next.

Really well crafted vignettes, all of them very hot, especially the delivery one. Very fun, hot read.