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6/2/22, 1:17 PM
Absolutely love this story, and really all of your stories. I was so happy when you mentioned the romantic feelings Adams was having and would definitely not mind seeing that play out while balancing Adams feelings against the Lucky persona. Would also be interested to see Adams/Lucky, as a reforming/reformed bigot, reacting to hate crime against himself or his master. Whatever you end up doing, I am sure it will be fantastic and I will love it. Keep it up!

6/2/22, 3:42 PM
@Knicksy I never start out any of my stories with the intent of their being a romantic connection, especially not this one. But it always ends up that way. What can I say, I'm a sucker of love.
6/2/22, 11:07 AM
A great co-mingling of all 3 stories. Really helps flesh out the world a bit more. I do wonder if/when they'll discover their Dubcon Corp connection.

6/2/22, 3:40 PM
@Timet Well both Hiro and Leroy both now work in some capacity with Dubcon Corp, so maybe...
6/2/22, 2:50 PM
Man, I really feel both the emotional stress and the hotness—you got me in my feels with how much this is hurting Luke, and Sammy too. And it’s a familiar experience to fail to understand that I’ve hurt someone/to be unable to understand. Keep up the good work.
6/2/22, 2:12 PM
Damn, everybody really wants to fuck Luke’s bubble butt! Yay for chill straight guys? This is fun.
5/31/22, 4:03 AM
One of my absolute favorites. I return to this every few months at least. Bravo!

6/2/22, 1:57 PM
@StageShowMM Thanks! I always really enjoy your work as well. Hope there will be more soon.
6/2/22, 1:50 PM
more please.... oh fuck...so good...
6/2/22, 12:41 PM
PHOLUS REBORN began as a short story that I deemed all "tell" and no "show". And as you can see, the novel ends with a "tell and not show" section of its own. But the fact is, I love epilogues! I like knowing what happens after the ending. I like knowing everything worked out, or didn't work out, and that everybody's moving on. Now, as if I knew my subject, I shot myself in the foot with this epilogue. In breaking the team apart, I weakened them. A centaur's strength comes in numbers, and in the second book, [CENTAUROMACHY](https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09RVDXR7M/ref=tmm_pap_swatch_0?_encoding=UTF8&qid=1643810153&sr=1-2), the antagonist takes advantage of this -- it isn't until they're deep in it that they realize had they been together, they wouldn't be in jeopardy at all. "Being together is our power" is a big lesson in book two. As I noted in an earlier chapter, it's been almost a year since I've read this and it was a lot of fun to go through it. There are a couple of small changes I'd make, but nothing that makes me regret what's already on the page. It has absolutely energized me about writing Book Three, inspired me in a way, as I can see hints about what I'm doing in Book Three here in the first -- that I hadn't really even planned at the time. The first two chapters of CENTAUROMACHY are [HERE on the GSS.](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10003439) If you choose to read them, chap 1 is expository, catching us up on what happened in Book One. Chap 2 sets up the major plot. CENTAUROMACHY is a very different book than PHOLUS, but it's a lot of fun to read. Thank you for taking the time to read me at all. I'm grateful.
6/2/22, 12:39 PM
*sigh* That's embarrassing, and extremely difficult to walk back from. I did read the entire "Pollination" series, though. That was also very well written and enjoyable.
6/2/22, 11:01 AM
I've been an avid reader of your work for quite some time now and this chapter's sex scene has to be one of the most insanely hot yet. So cool to see Luke evolve as a character over the years and see your craft go from strength to strength. Amazing stuff!
6/1/22, 7:45 PM
This is an engaging and incredible tale. So...does this group of centaurs need a healer? I have experience, even though I mostly work on smaller animals.

6/1/22, 11:33 PM
@Deej a centaur’s strength is in numbers, so welcome aboard. As for a healer, check out chap 16

6/2/22, 1:05 AM
@absman420 I just realized you're the author. I've been a fan of yours since I read "Ad Man" in 2013. I just want to be a centaur.

6/2/22, 10:02 AM
@Deej I hate to be the bearer, but “Ad Man” wasn’t mine, it was FanTCdude’s. I wrote a series loosely based on it, called [PLAYING W FANTCDUDE’S TOYS ](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/443539) that you might be thinking of.