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Silas
3/28/25, 3:38 AM
Wow…this was so hot! Thank you 🙏
3/28/25, 2:29 AM
Love to see where it goes
gdlosh13@gmail.com
3/28/25, 1:12 AM
I loved this. I wish it were not an old man but would loved to be enticed with the smell and the whisper of his words.
mbblover
3/28/25, 12:46 AM
awesome story! please please more chapters to cum!....
3/27/25, 3:16 AM
Will there be a bad ending where Henry's plan is discovered by Kurt?

3/27/25, 5:09 PM
@[Ozzy](/user/show/10048159) I feel like if there were to be a bad end scenerio, it could also be rather than Kurt finding out Henry’s plan, it would be right after Henry removed Tri-Hard and Nick’s personality/memories. Since while Kurt got reprogrammed to Cooperate with Henry, you can still see him trying to brainwash and change the “terms” which Henry does try to resist. So there could be one where he fails to do so because he didn’t expect it since Kurt is still “himself” because they need him to keep the cult/drones under control. (Kinda like how he tried to control Nick when he himself got brainwashed by him) Though honestly, I felt like there’s so many scenes which could’ve cause a bad end scenerio ngl XD

3/27/25, 11:13 PM
@[A Person](/user/show/916711) @[Ozzy](/user/show/10048159) Hi, guys! I played around with the idea of doing a bad ending here, but I think it will have to wait for just a while. I want to get the other side of the conflict brought up to speed (**H-3**, Hank and the **Crawlers**) before I go about doing any sort of endings. If everything goes to plan then there'll be a few 'bad ends' that play with the idea of each villain group winning in some way, but I need to level the playing field first. @[A Person](/user/show/916711)'s idea isn't far off, though! Maybe we'll see more from Kurt's personality shining through in the future,... Thank you both!
Anonymous
3/27/25, 7:41 PM
Thx Kev appreciate it
3/27/25, 6:47 PM
This story was living rent free in my head all morning — why does it work There are so many. I have been stuck in my head with simple “what makes a story compelling, and what makes it work” Inspiring
3/27/25, 4:41 PM
Brilliant story - as always
3/27/25, 3:29 PM
The way you brought the fantasy to the real and the real to the fantasy was amazing. And what we don’t see during the swaps. Chefs kiss.
3/26/25, 5:06 PM
First time in a while that a cliff hanger has made me this excited. Can't wait to see what happens next. Would be hot if Derek slowly turned the boys against each other.

3/27/25, 12:55 PM
@[Pits&Spit](/user/show/10055988) I agree!