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5/31/22, 3:17 PM
Amazing story. My favorite of yours so far. Please do a sequel.
R P
5/31/22, 2:57 PM
I’m really enjoying this series! The premise is really interesting, and seeing Chance gradually give in his desire for Ben is hot. Can’t wait to see what he does next😄
5/30/22, 4:48 PM
Thank you all very much for your comments, guys. I hope you continue to like the story, although it's going to get tougher and crueler. And the ending... well, some will like it and some won't, but I'm telling you that it's a happy ending.

5/31/22, 3:36 AM
@JorgeJog At this point I think the happiest ending would be David falling down a mine shaft. Onto a cactus farm. :p But seriously, it is YOUR story, and your decisions are the most important. David has crossed a line for me and I can’t root for him at all, but it will still be interesting to see what happens next. My only hope is that Danny isn’t commanded to be “happy” in his situation—if only because that’s way too close to home in terms of abuse. But we will see…

5/31/22, 9:04 AM
@Feed Your Head Don't worry. That's not going to happen. If there is something I really hate is when a slave who has been forced to be a slave, ends up accepting his situation and being happy, without any punishment or regret on the part of the one who forced him. And you know that happens in a lot of stories... But the ending may not leave you very satisfied either. I'm sorry if that's the case

5/31/22, 2:23 PM
@JorgeJog I’m glad to hear that, and I am glad we share that dislike! But as for the rest: don’t worry about me. As I said, this is YOUR story. You have to write what you want and feel, not what the audience (and certainly not individual members) want and feel. It will be wonderful then, because it will be yours. :)
5/31/22, 1:11 PM
Wow. Don’t know how I missed this. It’s great. I love the way the mechanism works. That it’s got corruption practically built in. The blow job scene was awesome. Travis is such a great pric already :)
5/31/22, 1:05 PM
Oh come on, Eagerly awaiting your next chapters ! Have Fun!
5/31/22, 1:04 PM
Writing a group scene is a challenge. I want to make sure everybody gets a "moment" but still keep the action moving forward. Fortunately, I've read a lot of comic books, so I got that covered. In fact, I choreographed this battle with Heracles in a notebook, beginning as a list of actions I wanted to see from each character, then put them in a rough order -- lots of arrows and circled bits. My notebook is rather a mess-- like my thoughts. Again, I want to point out how limited I was trapped in first person narration. Although a little more obvious in the last chapter, in that Pholus didn't know what was going on in the battle until he'd arrived, it was still a big challenge here. So I ended up with him sitting there holding Chiron while the battle took place around him. If I'd been in third person, I could have narrated through any character's eyes, moving around and getting different perspectives. I think the battle sequence in CENTAUROMACHY is significantly stronger for just this reason. Again, the things we learn.
Jack
5/31/22, 9:39 AM
Just a fantastic addition to the story. I can't wait to see what you write next!
easdf
5/31/22, 9:37 AM
Either try to fight him or get Dusty to help! I hate it when the asshole villain gets his way and Carter did nothing wrong. I'm all up for Carter learning to love bottoming, but that needs to be with Dusty who seems like a kind person. I also hope Rusty won't be able to lower Carter's intelligence. Firstly because he doesn't deserves this and secondly because a battle of wits seems more interesting.
R P
5/31/22, 9:31 AM
Wow, this is scorchingly hot! Hoping things work out okay for Sammy and Luke in the end 💕
5/31/22, 9:23 AM
Such a hot story I just wish the picture link still worked