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5/31/22, 1:05 PM
Oh come on, Eagerly awaiting your next chapters ! Have Fun!
5/31/22, 1:04 PM
Writing a group scene is a challenge. I want to make sure everybody gets a "moment" but still keep the action moving forward. Fortunately, I've read a lot of comic books, so I got that covered. In fact, I choreographed this battle with Heracles in a notebook, beginning as a list of actions I wanted to see from each character, then put them in a rough order -- lots of arrows and circled bits. My notebook is rather a mess-- like my thoughts. Again, I want to point out how limited I was trapped in first person narration. Although a little more obvious in the last chapter, in that Pholus didn't know what was going on in the battle until he'd arrived, it was still a big challenge here. So I ended up with him sitting there holding Chiron while the battle took place around him. If I'd been in third person, I could have narrated through any character's eyes, moving around and getting different perspectives. I think the battle sequence in CENTAUROMACHY is significantly stronger for just this reason. Again, the things we learn.
Jack
5/31/22, 9:39 AM
Just a fantastic addition to the story. I can't wait to see what you write next!
easdf
5/31/22, 9:37 AM
Either try to fight him or get Dusty to help! I hate it when the asshole villain gets his way and Carter did nothing wrong. I'm all up for Carter learning to love bottoming, but that needs to be with Dusty who seems like a kind person. I also hope Rusty won't be able to lower Carter's intelligence. Firstly because he doesn't deserves this and secondly because a battle of wits seems more interesting.
R P
5/31/22, 9:31 AM
Wow, this is scorchingly hot! Hoping things work out okay for Sammy and Luke in the end 💕
5/31/22, 9:23 AM
Such a hot story I just wish the picture link still worked
R P
5/31/22, 9:10 AM
Another super hot chapter! I like hearing the origin story for the horned god, and I’m glad they are back together again through their avatars ❤️
Nov 18, 2021
LucasT
3/14/22, 12:27 PM
great! Will there be an second part?

BONDAGE_Jonny
5/31/22, 8:58 AM
@LucasT, Yes, I'm also interested
5/31/22, 6:55 AM
I just love this series So hot! Wish I could be Luke.
5/31/22, 6:33 AM
Give in and encourage Rusty to top him and then beg for more.