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5/30/22, 1:13 PM
Oh this is such a hot premise! I love it already.
5/30/22, 1:03 PM
As I post this novel, I'm rereading it myself. It's been almost a year since I've read it last -- since working on the second book in the series (CENTAUROMACHY), anyway -- and I'd forgotten a lot of this chapter's contents. I think it builds really well and leaves us on my favorite line in the novel -- that whole _"I run to my fallen Erastês, spitting 'KILL HIM!' to Cavalier and my herd. 'KILL HERACLES!'”_ gets me every time. The "Mad Scene" was the writing challenge in this chapter, trying to communicate Pholus' perceptions being torn between two realities. Imagine how cool that would look on the page if the Magic Realm was a different font or character style... Sigh. Anyway -- next chapter gives us the climax. Hang tight.
Blue moon under hell
5/30/22, 12:03 AM
Perhaps i am a bit late but is this possible about sarnoga on warpmymind?

5/30/22, 12:14 PM
@Blue moon under hell Yes, it is.
R P
5/30/22, 10:13 AM
Damn, this series is so hot! Can’t wait to see what happens next with John and Joe :)
Anonymous
5/30/22, 7:07 AM
One word: BRAVO!
5/30/22, 6:10 AM
Definitely try and fail to fight it, there's no way Rusty wouldn't just Amp up his sub stats and sensitivity the second he could He's gonna turn Carter into a perfect healer muscle bottom
5/30/22, 4:02 AM
This was a great start to what I think will be a fascinating series. I really like how Chance found out about the powers simply because he's avoiding screen time. It does make me wonder how much I miss because I am on my phone a lot. But that's beside the point. The slow reveal of how these powers work was lovely, and your descriptions of the each of the main characters brought them to life really well. I hope we get to see Travis taking advantage of having guys blow him more often. Perhaps the power will help steer him in that direction? And I look forward to seeing the conflict from Chance wanting to fuck his friend/roommate, yet not wanting to take advantage of him. I'm also curious where the power came from, so I hope that gets explored as well. I'm definitely going to be coming back to read this one multiple times again. The reality-warping, the descriptions of what's happening, and the characters themselves hit all the right buttons for me.
5/29/22, 10:46 PM
Phewf! This is great. Can't wait for more.
5/29/22, 6:09 PM
I agree with the RAPE comment. It needs to be said. At the same time, I'm hoping that a balance is found. I'm not one for single sided vengeance. Lessons learned or both sides come out with some sense of contentment in their new positions
Anonymous
5/29/22, 9:50 AM
This is a very compelling story and I agree 100% with FYH above! Can't wait to see more!

5/29/22, 5:42 PM
Very much agree it was well written and compelling and echoed what i was told when i came forward but also centered the victim and allowed him to be correct and his emotions felt valid.