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5/30/22, 3:34 PM
i honestly hope that Danny can free himself from his toxic bf. I dont want to see him lost
5/30/22, 2:51 PM
Does David really still love Danny, it seems like he doesn't?
5/28/22, 2:42 PM
I think this works better than the previous chapter. Prayer is kinda boring to be honest. Any horny I get gets offset by hisbrun in a mill pervertness. Generic pervert master 101 material. A best thing in a hypnosis story is to not get into an asshole master( unless that's your thing). It takes me out of the experience personally. In the last chapter I could barely get hard on while the first chapter and this one gets me 11/10. Anyway good writing as always. Just hate pryer personally. Hate generic assholes especially generic gay assholes.

5/30/22, 9:03 AM
@Harolf Oh, I completely disagree, this chapter actually didn't do that much for me. 100% into the reverse-hypno/corruption kink and Ed does it best.

5/30/22, 2:36 PM
@Doopboopdoop y’all kinda hit the nail on the head as to why I wrote it this way. Some people have told me they love the tists perspective and some the subs. I figured it would be fun to explore both at the same moments, both so fans could have their preference and so it could be a fun challenge for me to keep it interesting. That said, in the coming chapters, there will be moments that Pryer is present but the sub I’m writing about is elsewhere. So those that find it repetitive will also get a bit of what they want. This story is one I’m quite proud of. And so happy for all the comments and emails. Y’all are the best.
5/30/22, 1:13 PM
Oh this is such a hot premise! I love it already.
5/30/22, 1:03 PM
As I post this novel, I'm rereading it myself. It's been almost a year since I've read it last -- since working on the second book in the series (CENTAUROMACHY), anyway -- and I'd forgotten a lot of this chapter's contents. I think it builds really well and leaves us on my favorite line in the novel -- that whole _"I run to my fallen Erastês, spitting 'KILL HIM!' to Cavalier and my herd. 'KILL HERACLES!'”_ gets me every time. The "Mad Scene" was the writing challenge in this chapter, trying to communicate Pholus' perceptions being torn between two realities. Imagine how cool that would look on the page if the Magic Realm was a different font or character style... Sigh. Anyway -- next chapter gives us the climax. Hang tight.
Blue moon under hell
5/30/22, 12:03 AM
Perhaps i am a bit late but is this possible about sarnoga on warpmymind?

5/30/22, 12:14 PM
@Blue moon under hell Yes, it is.
R P
5/30/22, 10:13 AM
Damn, this series is so hot! Can’t wait to see what happens next with John and Joe :)
Anonymous
5/30/22, 7:07 AM
One word: BRAVO!
5/30/22, 6:10 AM
Definitely try and fail to fight it, there's no way Rusty wouldn't just Amp up his sub stats and sensitivity the second he could He's gonna turn Carter into a perfect healer muscle bottom
5/30/22, 4:02 AM
This was a great start to what I think will be a fascinating series. I really like how Chance found out about the powers simply because he's avoiding screen time. It does make me wonder how much I miss because I am on my phone a lot. But that's beside the point. The slow reveal of how these powers work was lovely, and your descriptions of the each of the main characters brought them to life really well. I hope we get to see Travis taking advantage of having guys blow him more often. Perhaps the power will help steer him in that direction? And I look forward to seeing the conflict from Chance wanting to fuck his friend/roommate, yet not wanting to take advantage of him. I'm also curious where the power came from, so I hope that gets explored as well. I'm definitely going to be coming back to read this one multiple times again. The reality-warping, the descriptions of what's happening, and the characters themselves hit all the right buttons for me.