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Anonymous
5/29/22, 2:22 PM
Please keep going!!!
5/29/22, 1:49 PM
From preppy to punk and bully to companion; this was a fun chapter, and Himbo has had lots of fun too. Loved the Growlithe part, it was seriously fun to include a pup.

5/29/22, 2:21 PM
@Essex B-Dawg wasn't even in the original draft, but I liked the idea so much I changed it. No plan! 😂
Anonymous
5/29/22, 1:09 PM
Fight it, but lose.
5/29/22, 12:53 PM
Loved the perspective switch. Both chapters worked for me and wouldn't name one hotter than the other. Really hopping to see the rest of the family borught about their new desires and how the twins will keep working to adjust to their new roles. Thank you Edlam for another wonderful entry.
5/29/22, 12:39 PM
This chapter would have been completely different had I not been stuck in 1st person narration. Because we readers could only see what Red sees, the abductions had to happen in front of him. I think I found a pretty creative work-around, but I yearned for a 3rd person narrative -- fortunately, I got that in the second book, and I think it works significantly better. The TMZ-bit I've used in both books -- and it opens the third book, too, as a fun way to give exposition. (Harvey believes it -- Charles is a doubter.) There's another bit of trivia in this chapter. If you're a fan of POLLINATION, the SERIES, you might recognize a familiar name in the "comments" section, after the Gambit video. It's all one big universe...
R P
5/29/22, 10:53 AM
Damn this was hot! Seeing James slowly give in to the pec love was perfect 🔥
5/29/22, 7:31 AM
I chose A and C: Carter tries to fight it at first, but fails and ends up giving in, encouraging Rusty to top him (his submissive score is too high!). However, I suspect since Game Master are the one managing the game's events but not directly interacting with in-game characters, the moment Rusty enters Carter, he becomes a character like his avatar Dusty, or an NPC.
5/29/22, 7:27 AM
Fight it. Abuse of power stories are fun and all, to an extent. What's better? The abuser getting outplayed. Maybe Carter gets fucked, but he still has enough dominance left to power bottom Rusty, until Dusty can help out. Adjusting stats, or providing items to help Carter slay the dragon, as it were. Ultimately, I just want to see Carter triumph over Rusty, in whatever way that comes about.
5/28/22, 11:07 AM
I love how he makes him stuff his undies with warm creamy pasta like a loser and the tie. Both those moments got me going so hard. I hope more will eventually come. Excellent work

5/29/22, 6:22 AM
Many thanks! Glad you enjoyed!
5/27/22, 7:07 PM
it seems everyone wants to fight Rusty cause he’s an asshole but honestly I kind of want him to win. It’s really refreshing to see stories where the villain loses. I’m tired of the homophobic jock being put in his place, the most gut wrenching effective stories on this website are the ones where you like the main character and they’re a good person and despite that, they lose to the cocky villain. Those stories are better because they’re rare and because they’re somewhat realistic, at the end of the day, sometimes the bad guys win.

5/29/22, 6:18 AM
@Asisasio totally agree