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5/29/22, 12:39 PM
This chapter would have been completely different had I not been stuck in 1st person narration. Because we readers could only see what Red sees, the abductions had to happen in front of him. I think I found a pretty creative work-around, but I yearned for a 3rd person narrative -- fortunately, I got that in the second book, and I think it works significantly better. The TMZ-bit I've used in both books -- and it opens the third book, too, as a fun way to give exposition. (Harvey believes it -- Charles is a doubter.) There's another bit of trivia in this chapter. If you're a fan of POLLINATION, the SERIES, you might recognize a familiar name in the "comments" section, after the Gambit video. It's all one big universe...
R P
5/29/22, 10:53 AM
Damn this was hot! Seeing James slowly give in to the pec love was perfect 🔥
5/29/22, 7:31 AM
I chose A and C: Carter tries to fight it at first, but fails and ends up giving in, encouraging Rusty to top him (his submissive score is too high!). However, I suspect since Game Master are the one managing the game's events but not directly interacting with in-game characters, the moment Rusty enters Carter, he becomes a character like his avatar Dusty, or an NPC.
5/29/22, 7:27 AM
Fight it. Abuse of power stories are fun and all, to an extent. What's better? The abuser getting outplayed. Maybe Carter gets fucked, but he still has enough dominance left to power bottom Rusty, until Dusty can help out. Adjusting stats, or providing items to help Carter slay the dragon, as it were. Ultimately, I just want to see Carter triumph over Rusty, in whatever way that comes about.
5/28/22, 11:07 AM
I love how he makes him stuff his undies with warm creamy pasta like a loser and the tie. Both those moments got me going so hard. I hope more will eventually come. Excellent work

5/29/22, 6:22 AM
Many thanks! Glad you enjoyed!
5/27/22, 7:07 PM
it seems everyone wants to fight Rusty cause he’s an asshole but honestly I kind of want him to win. It’s really refreshing to see stories where the villain loses. I’m tired of the homophobic jock being put in his place, the most gut wrenching effective stories on this website are the ones where you like the main character and they’re a good person and despite that, they lose to the cocky villain. Those stories are better because they’re rare and because they’re somewhat realistic, at the end of the day, sometimes the bad guys win.

5/29/22, 6:18 AM
@Asisasio totally agree
5/29/22, 5:19 AM
Thank you for not shying away from the big issues these stories present. The word “rape” is rarely used on here, but in this case, it truly needs to be said. You also do a great job writing a cruel character who believes in things like “it’s not rape if it’s a partner.” This is an important story.
BCG
5/29/22, 3:36 AM
Great first chapter - transformation of a somewhat average yet kink repressed guy into a powerful top is a fantasy that is shared by many. I'm looking forward to reading more of Jack's dark adventures.
R P
5/29/22, 1:49 AM
I love Julio and Pedro, they are so cute together, and the sex so hot 🥵
JohnMC
5/29/22, 1:39 AM
I enjoyed this chapter more than I should! I feel so twisted but feeling good too! 🤤😈👅🐶