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R P
5/28/22, 10:07 PM
Incredibly hot series, with an equally hot (and sweet) ending!
R P
5/28/22, 9:21 PM
This was a fun and hot start! I hope we get to see more :)
Martin
5/28/22, 8:56 PM
I love this. the mind control is very elaborate and very hot. Please continue!
5/28/22, 8:23 PM
One of the more better dominant stories in this site in a while, it’s quite refreshing! Looking forward for more of your installments!
5/27/22, 10:20 PM
Well, in a short comment to say more than some long analysis, pointing out that i am locked in a steel 1.5 inch chastity cage without direct stim access, beginning at the point where Avery takes control, i lost myself in the description, and through when d-Gabriel is being locked in the transport box, i experienced a breathtaking hands free orgasm that left me panting, soggy and weak in my desk chair for several minutes. An exceptionally rare event. There are a few stories here that have accomplished that for me. Thank you for another one!

Martin
5/28/22, 2:50 PM
@RoboticExperiment3 Wow. That's the most amazing praise an author could ever hope for. Congrats, Felix!

felix
5/28/22, 8:11 PM
@Martin @RoboticExperiment3 Thanks you two! That sounds so gratifying!
AnonGhost
5/27/22, 6:15 PM
Honestly the way it's been going, I'd love to see Carter fight it and turn back to 'normal' with some minor improvements. And see Rusty get turned into a Himbo buttslut.

5/27/22, 6:28 PM
@AnonGhost agreed

Buckyboi
5/28/22, 8:06 PM
@AnonGhost also agreed
Nutiper
5/28/22, 6:56 PM
It's good to see you back! This is such an inventive, intriguing premise and a great start to the story. Seeing the way Travis and Chance navigate the literalness of the "promises" during the blowjob scene was great. Plus, of course, the heavy implication that Maria only left Ben because of a "promise" — _and_ that it was further "promises" which transformed her in various ways... It all does a great job of giving us the rules of how things work in this story, and foreshadows things to come... Also I _am_ a sucker for nice descriptions of butts, but this part definitely caught my attention: > > Ben rolled his eyes and continued on his way. Chance cocked his head to one side as his eyeline drifted down to Ben’s pants, watching his two hefty buns bounce back and forth as he walked. ”Damn,” Chance muttered. Especially since, seeing the way the rules for the "promises" require Chance to use them frequently and only for selfish reasons... Well, I'm intrigued to see how things develop, and where you take the story. Looking forward to reading more!
5/28/22, 3:01 AM
Get Dusty to help him, because having an ally on your side is better than being by yourself. Dusty seems to know much more about the game rules than Rusty does. While both of them are now extremely submissive, they still have their Dominance stat unchanged. Just have to get Rusty tired out. Other than that, this is an awesome chapter. So many more rules of the game gradually revealed and taking place. I actually want Carter to add Personality slider, if it's possible, and try being a full on Jock for a while, just to satisfy Rusty enough. Maybe it'll get the game finished faster. There's already too many stories where the apparent villain wins, turning normal and likable characters into messed up versions of their envisioning. Hoping that it could develop where both parties got what they wanted. Of course, Rusty could order Carter to add stuff in, which would end the story of he submitted.

5/28/22, 7:05 AM
@ChronoSeth But Carter doesn't really want any of this. The only reason he was caving in the first place on it was because Dusty has perfect charisma and intelligence and could presumably sweet talk anyone into doing anything. Also like, pretty much any story with mind control or transformation where it sticks is a villain, regardless of if the victim is "happy" or not. They altered a person's personality and/or body without them consenting or having any way to control the situation. It's so weird when people get on the moral high ground about these stories like you can realistically apply any morality to it.

5/28/22, 6:42 PM
@Silvoid That's true, I can see how appeasing Rusty is a non-consensual thing to do, as the villain is getting what he wants and he could make the changes to Carter stick which is what said victim doesn't want. I'm rooting for Carter to fight back and win against Rusty, as I don't like reading a doomed story.
5/28/22, 6:28 PM
You took a scene that has already excited and aroused so many and added even more exquisite eroticism. It’s sad Mowgli was eaten simply because it would’ve been lovely to read more of Kaa playing with the helpless man cub.
5/28/22, 5:58 PM
Not my usual cup of tea, but this was really hot. And more importantly, what a beautiful exploration of human connection and emotion. This story stands so well on it’s own, beyond the erotica. Bravo.