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5/28/22, 11:44 PM
Rusty should top him, but get so dickstracted in Carter's new himbo ass that he hardly even notices Dusty fiddle with his stats, making him a hung hard horny twink service top. And oops, looks like he just turned Carter into a dom/switch bottom! Rusty gets his wish to top all the hunks he wants - but they're always gonna be driving, and that thought keeps his cock _so_ ironhard for use.
5/14/22, 2:12 AM
First of all, that dinner was absolutely hilarious and wholesome. The conversation as the dad gets drunker is just fantastic. Whatever has happened between Allan and Cody is the stuff of dreams. Each moment they spend alone is as erotically charged as it's intensely romantic. The candor with which they express their feelings is intoxicating; and it's the sweetest thing. Can't wait to see how Xander fits in the puzzle and everything else you've just set up. Hopefully I won't wait another ten years. Thank you for sharing, Nocturne!

R P
5/28/22, 10:10 PM
Completely agree @Essex! The dinner scene was brilliant. And I love the perfect mix of the erotic and romantic between our boys :) I too hope we get to see more of them!
R P
5/28/22, 10:07 PM
Incredibly hot series, with an equally hot (and sweet) ending!
R P
5/28/22, 9:21 PM
This was a fun and hot start! I hope we get to see more :)
Martin
5/28/22, 8:56 PM
I love this. the mind control is very elaborate and very hot. Please continue!
5/28/22, 8:23 PM
One of the more better dominant stories in this site in a while, it’s quite refreshing! Looking forward for more of your installments!
5/27/22, 10:20 PM
Well, in a short comment to say more than some long analysis, pointing out that i am locked in a steel 1.5 inch chastity cage without direct stim access, beginning at the point where Avery takes control, i lost myself in the description, and through when d-Gabriel is being locked in the transport box, i experienced a breathtaking hands free orgasm that left me panting, soggy and weak in my desk chair for several minutes. An exceptionally rare event. There are a few stories here that have accomplished that for me. Thank you for another one!

Martin
5/28/22, 2:50 PM
@RoboticExperiment3 Wow. That's the most amazing praise an author could ever hope for. Congrats, Felix!

felix
5/28/22, 8:11 PM
@Martin @RoboticExperiment3 Thanks you two! That sounds so gratifying!
AnonGhost
5/27/22, 6:15 PM
Honestly the way it's been going, I'd love to see Carter fight it and turn back to 'normal' with some minor improvements. And see Rusty get turned into a Himbo buttslut.

5/27/22, 6:28 PM
@AnonGhost agreed

Buckyboi
5/28/22, 8:06 PM
@AnonGhost also agreed
Nutiper
5/28/22, 6:56 PM
It's good to see you back! This is such an inventive, intriguing premise and a great start to the story. Seeing the way Travis and Chance navigate the literalness of the "promises" during the blowjob scene was great. Plus, of course, the heavy implication that Maria only left Ben because of a "promise" — _and_ that it was further "promises" which transformed her in various ways... It all does a great job of giving us the rules of how things work in this story, and foreshadows things to come... Also I _am_ a sucker for nice descriptions of butts, but this part definitely caught my attention: > > Ben rolled his eyes and continued on his way. Chance cocked his head to one side as his eyeline drifted down to Ben’s pants, watching his two hefty buns bounce back and forth as he walked. ”Damn,” Chance muttered. Especially since, seeing the way the rules for the "promises" require Chance to use them frequently and only for selfish reasons... Well, I'm intrigued to see how things develop, and where you take the story. Looking forward to reading more!
5/28/22, 3:01 AM
Get Dusty to help him, because having an ally on your side is better than being by yourself. Dusty seems to know much more about the game rules than Rusty does. While both of them are now extremely submissive, they still have their Dominance stat unchanged. Just have to get Rusty tired out. Other than that, this is an awesome chapter. So many more rules of the game gradually revealed and taking place. I actually want Carter to add Personality slider, if it's possible, and try being a full on Jock for a while, just to satisfy Rusty enough. Maybe it'll get the game finished faster. There's already too many stories where the apparent villain wins, turning normal and likable characters into messed up versions of their envisioning. Hoping that it could develop where both parties got what they wanted. Of course, Rusty could order Carter to add stuff in, which would end the story of he submitted.

5/28/22, 7:05 AM
@ChronoSeth But Carter doesn't really want any of this. The only reason he was caving in the first place on it was because Dusty has perfect charisma and intelligence and could presumably sweet talk anyone into doing anything. Also like, pretty much any story with mind control or transformation where it sticks is a villain, regardless of if the victim is "happy" or not. They altered a person's personality and/or body without them consenting or having any way to control the situation. It's so weird when people get on the moral high ground about these stories like you can realistically apply any morality to it.

5/28/22, 6:42 PM
@Silvoid That's true, I can see how appeasing Rusty is a non-consensual thing to do, as the villain is getting what he wants and he could make the changes to Carter stick which is what said victim doesn't want. I'm rooting for Carter to fight back and win against Rusty, as I don't like reading a doomed story.