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5/28/22, 2:33 PM
Fight it, possibly combining with getting Dusty to help. Rusty continues to be the absolute WORST, and I want to see him lose. :p I also want to give you praise, though, for using Dusty to show how a *proper* sex maniac behaves. :p That is, whereas Rusty has no social skills and just keeps whining/demanding that he’s right/insisting on Carter doing what he wants (and thereby sexually harassing him), Dusty instead takes Carter’s words in stride and respects his wishes (with the subtle undercurrent of “let me try to charm you into it”). Again, it’s a testimony to your skill as a writer that the characters and audience response are so vibrant. :D
5/28/22, 2:23 PM
It’s always so great to see another story posted from you! And this one did not disappoint! Can’t wait to see how Chance uses his new abilities.
Anonymous
5/28/22, 2:22 PM
Ooo, you're back! I've missed your devilish writing, looking forward to seeing where this will go
5/28/22, 2:09 PM
At first impression, I thought this was going to be a gruff "Supernatural-Winchester" take off but you turned this into a novel intentional, consensual lovely story. Excellent work. Enviable creativity.
5/28/22, 2:09 PM
Very hot looking forward to more!
5/28/22, 2:07 PM
I want to see Carter try to resist, fail, get his anal pleasure and prostate pleasure stats raised to 5 to go with that 5 submission, and find himself helplessly having the best sex of his life getting fucked by his new master. Then, have Rusty give Carter an oral fixation, cum addiction, and lack of gag reflex (maybe a Deep Throat stat of 5) and have Rusty and Dusty spit roasting him while he cums over and over from the submission and sexual stimulation. Then, Rusty should start planning for the game session, and the orgy he is going to create when he gives the other players Gay Top stats of 5 and watches them plough Carter's slutty hole. I know this is a little more detailed answer than you were looking for, but that's where I would like to see the story go.
5/28/22, 2:02 PM
Despite not being my cup of tea, this was still really well-written and flew without any issues, it was quite the appealing read. Nice job.
5/28/22, 1:15 PM
As I've been posting this novel on GSS, I've been plotting (and writing) the third book in this series: TRANSFIGURATION. Posting PHOLUS REBORN has given me an opportunity to reread it, which I haven't done since before I worked on Book Two, CENTAUROMACHY. I'm happy to say that I planted the seeds for what I'm doing in Book Three here in Book One without even realizing I was doing it. As I re-read Book One, knowing what I'm doing in Book Three, it gives the text (in this chapter, especially) a very different meaning. As an aside, I had some initial reservations about doing a centaur sex scene. Was it beastiality? I had some discussions on the Forum about it at the time. Consensus was that since centaurs can give consent, it wasn't. But I will say that as a guy who's writing books about centaurs, I'm not into centaur sex...
Anonymous
5/28/22, 1:13 PM
Prefiero a Dusty que a Rusty, por lo que a combatirlo, unamonos a Dusty y remplacemos a Rusty
5/28/22, 1:08 PM
One of the hottest stories ive read. Needs to be made into a film badly!!!!