Recent Comments

3/27/25, 6:47 PM
This story was living rent free in my head all morning — why does it work There are so many. I have been stuck in my head with simple “what makes a story compelling, and what makes it work” Inspiring
3/27/25, 4:41 PM
Brilliant story - as always
3/27/25, 3:29 PM
The way you brought the fantasy to the real and the real to the fantasy was amazing. And what we don’t see during the swaps. Chefs kiss.
3/26/25, 5:06 PM
First time in a while that a cliff hanger has made me this excited. Can't wait to see what happens next. Would be hot if Derek slowly turned the boys against each other.

3/27/25, 12:55 PM
@[Pits&Spit](/user/show/10055988) I agree!
3/27/25, 6:21 AM
I want to be the Object OO.
3/27/25, 5:56 AM
Love the way the revelations unfold
Anonymous
3/27/25, 12:52 AM
I really hope this story is continued.....one of the best written on here.
3/27/25, 12:25 AM
Please continue this story!
3/26/25, 3:09 AM
Love this. Very hot

3/27/25, 12:06 AM
@[Awrles](/user/show/914383) Thanks...😘
Anonymous
3/26/25, 11:03 PM
You can add AI pictures for visualization of each character. I would love to see the bullies in action again...

3/27/25, 12:05 AM
@Anonymous Thanks for suggestion for upcoming chapters I will add it...