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5/27/22, 12:39 AM
Absolutely love the 'It's ruining his whole life' angle
Anonymous
5/27/22, 12:11 AM
A great start to a story. Interesting character. Good foreshadowing with plenty of room for surprise twists.
5/27/22, 12:10 AM
An adult retelling of a classic story with an ending I rather enjoyed. The seduction of the victim and the incredibly hot and sexy slow burn until we hear the mandatory "Ping" was truly superb. You never cease to surprise me, and though not a vore fan, this is still a really hot story that was masterfully told. Kudos, Twan!
Apr 11, 2021
4/11/21, 5:01 PM
Cool idea here, and a neat foundation for a longer series. For my taste, I'd love to get more detail on the physical sensations - what it feels like for Chuck to get rimmed, the sensation of having his ass stretched by whatever Diego slid up there... all that good stuff. Regardless, looking forward to see where you take it!

4/11/21, 5:19 PM
@Noam de Pluma Interesting comment. I thought I actually was including a lot of description of the physical sensations, enough that I worried I was stretching plausibility, since I'd already established that Chuck's whole body felt numb due to the neurotoxin and muscle relaxant that had been injected into him. I'm guessing that what you're really looking for is more pleasurable descriptions of physical sensations, and that's something that I'm going to have a tough time writing with this series, partly because it essentially involves men being raped by weird insect creatures from the Amazon, but also because I don't bottom, and I don't really like being rimmed. I've had readers ask for more anal intercourse in my stories for a long time, but it's tough to write erotically about sex acts you don't personally enjoy.

4/11/21, 6:27 PM
@Hypnothrill All fair points, and my personal preferences are, obviously, *personal*, so my predilection for spending an entire paragraph explaining what it feels like to have X object enter Y hole is very much Not Everyone's Cup Of Tea :D If you're finding it's a challenge to write 'pleasurable' descriptions of things you don't personally enjoy, one potential way around it is to just write what it feels like using neutral language... a tongue up the ass is warm, wet and slithery. Neither good nor bad, just a thing kind of happening *at* the victim. The sensations could grow more intense, distracting them from putting up a good mental fight. Basically, I'm sensing that you want to focus on the mental aspect, but feel some pressure to write stuff that you don't connecte with. It might be easier for you to write about sex acts that aren't your bag if you use them to heighten the struggle of the psychological side and showcase why some people give in faster or slower, depending on how they react to and enjoy (or not) the physical sensations.

Jpm
5/26/22, 11:03 PM
@Hypnothrill, how about the feeling of the transformation of their cocks becoming sensory organs by the alien creatures directing them?
5/26/22, 10:24 PM
I'm so fucking into the excessive cum—tons of cum (and cum inflation...) is pretty much my biggest kink out there. Even though I get squeamish at the whole "it's ruining his life" thing because I'm a fuckin' softie, I will most likely still read every chapter you post! (Also, I spy that linear algebra. Is somebody a scientist of sorts? I just graduated with my B.S. in physics, so I perk up at any accurate math beyond algebra.)

5/26/22, 10:41 PM
Thanks for the praise! And yeah, I'm a statistics major.
Jake the Nerdy Fox
5/26/22, 8:43 PM
Woof super hot, not really into vore but everything from the taking off his underwear and letting it fall to the details about all the coils in the trees. Woof so much hotness to love especially everyone being anthro animals really is what I like and fantasize about. Amazing X3
5/26/22, 8:19 PM
I'm really enjoying this series Let's see where this goes
5/26/22, 7:56 PM
This is one of my favourite stories in a long time. I wish that James hadn’t betrayed Gabriel in the end, but that’s just my personal taste. Other than that it was an amazing story. You should write more stories in this universe. The world building and mechanics of how the rubber works have been amazing, and I’d love to see more of it!
5/26/22, 10:45 AM
Boy, aren't the people at Shanghai Pharmaceuticals going to be surprised and disappointed when all the whites start worshipping Uyghur men as gods! All kidding about the nebulous definition of "Asian" aside, I did think this chapter laid out a very hot mass enslavement scenario. I just think it would be even hotter if the gas affected Asian men too, and they went from being reluctant to participate in this racial domination to zealously believing that they are the master race.

5/26/22, 3:22 PM
@Hypnothrill Oh the plot holes are ample! Why would China make a formula that makes their democratic neighbors the Koreans able to enthrall most of the planet, too? I have no idea and I'm the author! 🤣 That said, making it not affect Asians was a deliberate decision - I wanted to reserve the chance to write a chapter at some point where some white guy gets stuck pining over a totally uninterested and unreciprocating Asian guy. Actually, more broadly than that, I tend to believe in the generally corrupting influence of power - that most guys, if they found out suddenly a good chunk of the world's men related to them as gods, wouldn't need alteration to give in to the urge to take advantage of that. Kinda like the Ring of Gyges proposition. Like, if everyone in the world starts telling you you ARE the master race, I think it doesn't take drugging you for you to start buying into it. And to me it's hotter to see the Asian characters seizing their power of their own volition. 😈
5/26/22, 5:41 PM
Hot story, though I personally get a little heated politically when nation's get involved with raceplay. Especially when it comes to China. The formula would probably work on all non han people. But that's just my two cents. You writing is good and hope to read more from you in the future.

5/26/22, 7:06 PM
@Flamefox23 Yeah, I acknowledge as much in my response to Hypnothrill in chapter 2. The racial stuff is full of holes, for sure.