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5/27/22, 2:00 AM
Can’t wait to read who is entering apartment. Very good chapter. Anyone else feeling a little envious of lucky lol
R P
5/27/22, 1:13 AM
This is delightful and very sweet ❤️
5/27/22, 1:00 AM
This is such a fun series. Loving it.
5/27/22, 12:39 AM
Absolutely love the 'It's ruining his whole life' angle
Anonymous
5/27/22, 12:11 AM
A great start to a story. Interesting character. Good foreshadowing with plenty of room for surprise twists.
5/27/22, 12:10 AM
An adult retelling of a classic story with an ending I rather enjoyed. The seduction of the victim and the incredibly hot and sexy slow burn until we hear the mandatory "Ping" was truly superb. You never cease to surprise me, and though not a vore fan, this is still a really hot story that was masterfully told. Kudos, Twan!
Apr 11, 2021
4/11/21, 5:01 PM
Cool idea here, and a neat foundation for a longer series. For my taste, I'd love to get more detail on the physical sensations - what it feels like for Chuck to get rimmed, the sensation of having his ass stretched by whatever Diego slid up there... all that good stuff. Regardless, looking forward to see where you take it!

4/11/21, 5:19 PM
@Noam de Pluma Interesting comment. I thought I actually was including a lot of description of the physical sensations, enough that I worried I was stretching plausibility, since I'd already established that Chuck's whole body felt numb due to the neurotoxin and muscle relaxant that had been injected into him. I'm guessing that what you're really looking for is more pleasurable descriptions of physical sensations, and that's something that I'm going to have a tough time writing with this series, partly because it essentially involves men being raped by weird insect creatures from the Amazon, but also because I don't bottom, and I don't really like being rimmed. I've had readers ask for more anal intercourse in my stories for a long time, but it's tough to write erotically about sex acts you don't personally enjoy.

4/11/21, 6:27 PM
@Hypnothrill All fair points, and my personal preferences are, obviously, *personal*, so my predilection for spending an entire paragraph explaining what it feels like to have X object enter Y hole is very much Not Everyone's Cup Of Tea :D If you're finding it's a challenge to write 'pleasurable' descriptions of things you don't personally enjoy, one potential way around it is to just write what it feels like using neutral language... a tongue up the ass is warm, wet and slithery. Neither good nor bad, just a thing kind of happening *at* the victim. The sensations could grow more intense, distracting them from putting up a good mental fight. Basically, I'm sensing that you want to focus on the mental aspect, but feel some pressure to write stuff that you don't connecte with. It might be easier for you to write about sex acts that aren't your bag if you use them to heighten the struggle of the psychological side and showcase why some people give in faster or slower, depending on how they react to and enjoy (or not) the physical sensations.

Jpm
5/26/22, 11:03 PM
@Hypnothrill, how about the feeling of the transformation of their cocks becoming sensory organs by the alien creatures directing them?
5/26/22, 10:24 PM
I'm so fucking into the excessive cum—tons of cum (and cum inflation...) is pretty much my biggest kink out there. Even though I get squeamish at the whole "it's ruining his life" thing because I'm a fuckin' softie, I will most likely still read every chapter you post! (Also, I spy that linear algebra. Is somebody a scientist of sorts? I just graduated with my B.S. in physics, so I perk up at any accurate math beyond algebra.)

5/26/22, 10:41 PM
Thanks for the praise! And yeah, I'm a statistics major.
Jake the Nerdy Fox
5/26/22, 8:43 PM
Woof super hot, not really into vore but everything from the taking off his underwear and letting it fall to the details about all the coils in the trees. Woof so much hotness to love especially everyone being anthro animals really is what I like and fantasize about. Amazing X3
5/26/22, 8:19 PM
I'm really enjoying this series Let's see where this goes