Recent Comments

5/26/22, 12:43 PM
Not just here on this Forum, I have many friends who are writers in the Real World, too. I have a bookshelf reserved for books by other self-publishers and friends. There's a fun "if you buy my book, I'll buy yours" back and forth that I love about all of us. Twitter is loaded with "post your cover photo on this thread" kind of groups -- I take advantage of them all. Anyway, the one comment I've gotten from all of them is praise for the video montage section of this chapter. I do very little "meta" writing in this book -- though CENTAUROMACHY is loaded with it -- but this particular moment continues to get positive feedback. Said my friend Wayne Purdy, author of [BUTTERFLY GIRL](https://www.amazon.com/Butterfly-Girl-Heck-Collins-Mystery/dp/B094T5SMXC/ref=sr_1_1?crid=38QMDGOYCR4I6&keywords=butterfly+girl+purdy&qid=1653568814&sprefix=butterfly+girl+purdy%2Caps%2C48&sr=8-1), "I've never read a video montage before. Clever, clever, clever."
5/26/22, 12:31 PM
UGH, i had to wait until i had the free time to REALLY appreciate this chapter, as soon as I saw it was going to be a good one. and boy howdy am i glad i did! UNF, i cannot wait for this chapter from the twins perspective, that's really my favorite part of this series, seeing the world shift and turn for the boys who have someone else think for them. CANNOT WAIT. SO HOT. I'm kind of dying that you have decided to space out your chapters like you have, but i respect it. Cannot wait for more!
5/26/22, 12:27 PM
This story is so hot. The idea and themes are genius!!!
Ng5
5/26/22, 9:47 AM
Thanks guys! :grin: I also want a ride into this world!
5/24/22, 11:41 PM
Your Twilight Zone-esque ending is amazing. What a twist!

5/26/22, 9:35 AM
@MeddlerIncs thanks so much!
Anonymous
5/26/22, 9:01 AM
I just love this story, thanks for this and I hope your life get better.
5/26/22, 8:29 AM
I think I am in the wrong reality :) is there a portal in yours ? :) I love your storys ...
5/26/22, 7:59 AM
Where is the next chapter... I have loved this store since naked ginger wrote it.... keep it up man!!!!
5/26/22, 6:48 AM
Always good to read this adventure carry on, Rubber, Drone and control is always the best for me - O I wished I lived in a world like this
Evan
5/26/22, 6:13 AM
I'm really enjoying this series. The head-messing that GoonNoob puts characters through is just wonderful. I love how they end up happy and enjoying it. And I care about the characters. Even this dirtbag (his actions in Thong Fags were horrendous). I was so worried when Johnson was late home. Dying to know what you have planned with the visitor. Especially with Lucky locked in a cage and vulnerable. Helpless to help beyond a bark.