Recent Comments

3/26/25, 5:06 PM
First time in a while that a cliff hanger has made me this excited. Can't wait to see what happens next. Would be hot if Derek slowly turned the boys against each other.

3/27/25, 12:55 PM
@[Pits&Spit](/user/show/10055988) I agree!
3/27/25, 6:21 AM
I want to be the Object OO.
3/27/25, 5:56 AM
Love the way the revelations unfold
Anonymous
3/27/25, 12:52 AM
I really hope this story is continued.....one of the best written on here.
3/27/25, 12:25 AM
Please continue this story!
3/26/25, 3:09 AM
Love this. Very hot

3/27/25, 12:06 AM
@[Awrles](/user/show/914383) Thanks...😘
Anonymous
3/26/25, 11:03 PM
You can add AI pictures for visualization of each character. I would love to see the bullies in action again...

3/27/25, 12:05 AM
@Anonymous Thanks for suggestion for upcoming chapters I will add it...
Muscle-Flex
3/26/25, 11:31 PM
So good! The scenes with Brad were really hot. I like how Vale isn't always perfect - how he gets a little anxious as to whether something is going to work. The idea of the break is clever. The final scene with Ryan was perfect. We can see how Vale is working overtime to hold together the progress he's made and tighten his control in the face of concerns about the break causing some of the guys to start questioning. Luke and Jason will clearly be his big problems. That brings good tension to the narrative. And then there's mystery Mark... Great writing, as always. Looking forward to what comes next!
3/24/25, 3:17 PM
I love the premise. Hoping you will include more chapters. Maybe some more professors (chemistry professor in the lab turning into a muscular baseball player, batting the beakers with his bat, making delightful explosions; the physics professor, now fascinated with the physics of the anus, and how much cock he can now take into himself, etc.). Hot and fun and sexy. More please!

3/26/25, 9:29 PM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) My, my, these are excellent ideas. I've been thinking about something.
3/26/25, 9:19 PM
This is so very hot and well-written! I would love to see more, especially with Superman fighting how good it feels to submit.