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5/24/22, 11:28 PM
I loved this story! Made me so hot. i like inside view of the sub-sub-culture of Black Masters of White Slaves. Damn that shit is such a turn on! Thank You!
R P
5/24/22, 10:57 PM
Another super hot chapter! Love the story-within -the- story, the shift in perspective doesn’t seem confusing at all.
5/24/22, 10:30 PM
An intensely hot follow up to an already very hot story that's a big classic by now. You brought this even further and the changes this time around bring the sequel to a higher standard.
5/24/22, 10:13 PM
A really hot story with a very hot ending. Thank you for sharing!
5/24/22, 10:06 PM
Outstanding. So excited about the new spherical mitts, and what else could be going to happen to Gabe. Thank you.
Anonymous
5/24/22, 9:32 PM
This is amazing. Please keep them coming!
5/24/22, 9:13 PM
This is great! Looking forward to see how much more these two will be corrupted, and how many more will Preston be corrupting.
5/24/22, 12:49 AM
I feel like I've read this story before. Was it previously posted? Did the commissioner have you doing a re-write of an existing story? Also... linking to your tumblr at the end destroys the anonymity for contest purposes, the reviewer should have caught that and eliminated the link. That out of the way, I did enjoy this story because it appeals to my fetishes. I particularly love any scene where a musk-controller pulls the victim's head into his armpit - I'll take that over "look into my eyes" any day of the week. The transformation sequence was fairly well done and was certainly enjoyable. The twist of needing a smarter victim to start with because of the dumbing down nature of the muscle growth transformation is a neat gimmick, though not a new one I don't think (again... that nagging feeling I've read this story before!) The story did need some editing passes for typos and clarity. I tend to enjoy stories by this author, though this one is very hot it's not actually his best writing. Other stories by him have better polish and tighter editing.

Tight Stories
5/24/22, 3:17 AM
@amul Its my story but you have a point about my tumblur, ill remove the story and repost blank as I don't wanna be seen to cheat or anything.

Tight Stories
5/24/22, 3:20 AM
@amuli turns out I can edit it. :) so I removed my tumblur. I had no intention of ruining it. Plus thanks for ya kind words. I wrote it by comission and thought it fitted perfectly. You may have seen shared on tumblur as I posted it there too.

Martin
5/24/22, 7:52 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Thanks for removing the link. Reposting an older story for a challenge is fine, as long as it hasn't been posted on GSS before.
5/24/22, 7:00 PM
One of the best stories I have read for a very long time, the writing was great and the story was original. Rather than be offended by the initial MF aspect, I considered as merely a scene setter and a part of the story… Like others I am keen to read more…
5/24/22, 5:38 PM
oh very nice will have dreams about thiss