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Chastor
5/25/22, 8:01 PM
When's the next part coming?
5/25/22, 7:05 PM
That was hot. Would love to see Gabriel force James to give him a blow job. His rubber cum would immobilize James long enough for Gabriel to get him back in his suit. I see James becoming his mindless slave if at the exact moment Gabriel let's loose a steady stream of rubber cum up James' ass, Gabriel presses the turbo button on James' suit. The turbo function would make the suit respond to Gabriel's cum. I do want to see Gabriel keep his size he just takes away James' phone before the call is answered.
5/25/22, 5:19 PM
Can't wait for more!
5/25/22, 4:22 PM
Awesome! James is a devious little hottie! The idea of a null bulge from Marik above is super intense, since he wouldn't be able to cum out the transformation it would trap Gabe in his new double rubber form either forever or until the purchaser removed the null bulge. Love the huge muscle form Gabe has now and I hope he spends quite some time enjoying it
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5/25/22, 3:20 PM
i hope u back bc your writting is great😍
5/25/22, 3:18 PM
Oh my gosh, this is so cute—and it makes me happy just reading it. I can’t wait for more! I also think it’s neat that right now his powers aren’t strong enough to summon emotions in Colton, and so we kind of know the love is real. :]
5/25/22, 3:10 PM
This is really cute and I’m glad it’s on Cupid! It’ll be interesting seeing how their romance unfolds and, if you go this way, questioning whether or not the love is real if Spinel can control people’s emotions. Once upon a time I had a story about that idea, but I never brought it to fruition. I’m looking forward to seeing whatever you do!
5/25/22, 2:14 PM
A great start with the Master established and the next victims starting their journey. Hope to see more soon!
5/25/22, 1:39 PM
Keratos story was truly a great addition to the lore and world building, and the shift in perspective was perfectly done. You continue to build this narrative, characters and world and I become more enamored with it the more I read. You know I'm a big fan and will continue along for the ride on your fantastic story. Amazing job, as always.
5/25/22, 1:10 PM
The longest chapter of the novel -- but that's because I couldn't bear to break off the Magic Realm section as a separate chapter. Still, I think it reads pretty fast. In fact, it had not been my intent from the beginning to make Pokey a flying centaur. But every time I looked at pictures of unicorns, Google images pulled up Pegasi, or some weird combo of the two -- I've since learned the name "Alicorn" -- so I figured, why not? Pokey is the team's magician, and we learn quickly that in this realm, Magic is based on force of will. Pokey's wings have become a defining characteristic and added an important element to the team -- aerial support! (Plus he got to give the magical middle finger to Gambit, sweetening the moment.) It was a spontaneous decision that totally paid off. Still, this is by far my favorite chapter in the novel. It was the first time I got to discover the team's group dynamic. Their group scenes are so easy to write -- they play off each other so nicely -- they literally write themselves.