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5/24/22, 1:13 AM
I agree that the rape was reprehensible and punishable but the story rather redeems Applejack. I do like that Pholus questions his own necessity. I think he needs a confrontation with Cav if he's to remain the boss and accountable only to Chiron. You're weaving an incredible story and I love what you're doing!!

5/24/22, 10:04 AM
@Stroppy Author Red does forgive AppleJack, but AppleJack “sees the light” by whatever happened between him and Cav in the Magic Realm. (Interestingly, when writing this chapter, I started to regret being in first person. It limited what we could see to Red’s perceptions, especially in the Battle Sequences. In the 2nd book, I open up narration and use a 3rd person omniscient— it works so much better.) By the end of Book Two, we have a fully functioning team where everyone knows his place — it takes a while to iron all this out.
5/24/22, 7:45 AM
curious about the follow-up
Chase
5/24/22, 5:46 AM
So hot!!! Thank you!!!! So glad you started with the youngest and most vulnerable! Hope their corrupted the worst and get into piss and maybe scat. Love it.
Evan
5/24/22, 5:36 AM
Love this idea.
Dec 20, 2021
Ben
5/24/22, 5:28 AM
Still one of my favorites, would love to see more from this idea ;3
boi98229
5/24/22, 5:27 AM
Very original, a little weird in the nicest sort of way, and extremely hot! Thanks so much!
Evan
5/24/22, 5:06 AM
What a great start! I am really liking this, very turned on that he went undercover and has just clearly doomed himself to become what he was trying to save his friend from.
Feb 23, 2014
5/24/22, 4:51 AM
yes again you did good i will dream about this
5/24/22, 4:07 AM
Always a rare treat to get a new EdIam story. The quality is excellent and it ticks all my kink boxes.
5/24/22, 3:48 AM
This made me cum pretty hard!