Recent Comments

Evan
5/24/22, 5:06 AM
What a great start! I am really liking this, very turned on that he went undercover and has just clearly doomed himself to become what he was trying to save his friend from.
Feb 23, 2014
5/24/22, 4:51 AM
yes again you did good i will dream about this
5/24/22, 4:07 AM
Always a rare treat to get a new EdIam story. The quality is excellent and it ticks all my kink boxes.
5/24/22, 3:48 AM
This made me cum pretty hard!
5/23/22, 8:33 PM
No, not Cubster! Professor remains, and I'm rooting for the bad guy. Can't wait till next chapter!

5/24/22, 3:21 AM
@Essex Always fun to root for the bad guys👹 Thanks for commenting!
5/24/22, 1:35 AM
I get the impression that the professor plans on keeping his new slaves after the game. I like his thinking.

5/24/22, 3:20 AM
@Marik29 😈
Anonymous
5/24/22, 2:48 AM
Loving it!! Great chapter!!!
5/24/22, 1:57 AM
I'm loving this story, cannot WAIT for the next chapter!
Fred W Kong
5/24/22, 1:24 AM
I had this open in a new window for a few hours, thinking I would read it right before bed, but it just kept calling me. So _tempting_, I just couldn't _resist_ reading. For real, though, fantastic story. I love that it can work in isolation from chapter 1, as it focusses on a very different transformation concept. If I could ask for one thing it would be a bit more time with Ian, James, and Connor before the transformation starts in earnest, but that would be (a) not porn and (b) delaying Ian's transformation scene, which was iconic incredible fantastic beautiful etc. We'll see if I'm lying awake at 2 AM needing to reread this chapter before I sleep, like with the first one :P
5/24/22, 1:06 AM
Slow burn, thorough morality warping, IQ loss, and slutty twinks…everything we could ask for. I love how you add in small mentions of how the psychological changes steer their behavior as well (like the new impulses to shoplift). Kudos for topping the first chapter—no small feat!