Recent Comments

5/24/22, 4:07 AM
Always a rare treat to get a new EdIam story. The quality is excellent and it ticks all my kink boxes.
5/24/22, 3:48 AM
This made me cum pretty hard!
5/23/22, 8:33 PM
No, not Cubster! Professor remains, and I'm rooting for the bad guy. Can't wait till next chapter!

5/24/22, 3:21 AM
@Essex Always fun to root for the bad guys👹 Thanks for commenting!
5/24/22, 1:35 AM
I get the impression that the professor plans on keeping his new slaves after the game. I like his thinking.

5/24/22, 3:20 AM
@Marik29 😈
Anonymous
5/24/22, 2:48 AM
Loving it!! Great chapter!!!
5/24/22, 1:57 AM
I'm loving this story, cannot WAIT for the next chapter!
Fred W Kong
5/24/22, 1:24 AM
I had this open in a new window for a few hours, thinking I would read it right before bed, but it just kept calling me. So _tempting_, I just couldn't _resist_ reading. For real, though, fantastic story. I love that it can work in isolation from chapter 1, as it focusses on a very different transformation concept. If I could ask for one thing it would be a bit more time with Ian, James, and Connor before the transformation starts in earnest, but that would be (a) not porn and (b) delaying Ian's transformation scene, which was iconic incredible fantastic beautiful etc. We'll see if I'm lying awake at 2 AM needing to reread this chapter before I sleep, like with the first one :P
5/24/22, 1:06 AM
Slow burn, thorough morality warping, IQ loss, and slutty twinks…everything we could ask for. I love how you add in small mentions of how the psychological changes steer their behavior as well (like the new impulses to shoplift). Kudos for topping the first chapter—no small feat!
5/22/22, 5:01 PM
This is the first time commenting on any of the stories that I have read on here. The story was absolutely amazing - exceptionally engaging and so incredibly well written. I could complete lose myself into the story, and felt empathy for Kyle and Ben. The pacing of the story kept me wanting to continue reading until I could finally finish the story. Upon finishing, I immediately looked to see what else you had written. I hope to read something new from you in the future. Absolutely first rate! Just as a side note, you were incredibly accurate with Kyle's clothing issues. I was "blessed" with the same issue in regards to butt and hips as Kyle's post transformation. Growing up, my grandma used to alter my clothes to get them to fit correctly. I have what is commonly known as birthing hips. For me to get pants to fight over my hips and bubble butt, the waist gaps terribly. I have actually never tried women's jeans, but have always joked about it.

5/24/22, 12:49 AM
@CatNoogie Comments like these are what make me want to write! Thank you so much for your kind words. As for other works of mine, I have one other published story that explores some related themes here. However, that comes with the caveat that it's a furry (and gender) based transformation story. I'm aware that that sort of thing is rather divisive and so I don't have it posted here as this isn't really the venue for such works. But I'm be happy to share a link if you, or others, are interested. In fact, you can find the link from my twitter, where I try to coordinate my various, but sparse, postings. https://twitter.com/LloydIrving10 Beyond that, I fear I'm a victim of too many interests and too little time. I have a lot of things in the works, but nothing ready for primetime. That being said, I collaborated extensively on Speedychopslover's recent story on here: https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/10001698 I'm not the primary author, but I think you'll find something to like there too. As for your side note, I'm glad my invented scenario matched well to a lived experience! I try to make things as realistic as I can (well as realistic as I can in the context of fantastical and impossible transformations), so I'm glad I got that detail right!
5/24/22, 12:07 AM
I’m so glad that people commented on this and brought it to my attention. It’s quite insightful (unsurprising, I knew Bracken was a sharp guy). It’s great food for thought and made me examine why I do basically hate certain stories that other people love. I’ve long since made my peace with the fact that some W.B. stories just don’t work for me because I will find them too mean, that being said, sometimes they’re just mean enough but also hot and so I find they work for me.