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3/26/25, 9:10 AM
I enjoyed this story, i'd like to read more about force 6 and how Unit SF-07 assisted his New Master
3/26/25, 8:59 AM
Me encanta como continúo esto. Espero alguien lo continúe en el futuro.
3/26/25, 6:45 AM
Very beautiful! Echoing others, love to see this series continue! And absolutely loved so many parts of this chapter - especially your description of the latex transformation and how it made him feel. Looking forward to what happens next!
Anonymous
3/26/25, 6:06 AM
Good start, I really enjoyed it. Keen for the next part!
3/17/25, 9:11 PM
That got sad at the end :slightly_frowning_face: Good progression though as his body is still ramping it up. I do hope he finds a small way to manage it, but being unmanageable is part of the fun. I wonder if he finds the file on his computer and he'll listen to it to make sure that's what did it... :smiling_imp:

3/25/25, 3:52 PM
@[djinnie](/user/show/16878) True, an emotional roller coaster like such a situation has ups as well as downs. As for the file, who knows. It would be horrible if his...'output' became even more extreme, wouldn't it? :smiling_imp:

3/26/25, 3:55 AM
@[fapsalad](/user/show/10043322) Even more extreme?! Sound absolutely AWful... I would never wish such a thing on ANYone, even myself... :smiling_imp:
3/26/25, 3:32 AM
love this series.
Anon
3/26/25, 3:29 AM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) I see....so Ray is kind of seeing divinity through various lenses. I suppose in a way the idea of consummation of divine love is present in a spiritual fashion in sufi literature- the archetype of the lovers is there. I'm not sure if that has a christian variant (perhaps in being the "bride" of christ or the like)- but sufi literature sees the tale of Layla and Majnun (romeo and juliet before romeo and juliet) as showing how mad love can lead to the divine, and of Potiphar's wife (who basically goes from two-timing conniving seductress to madly in love tragic lady with a whole lot of cunning, a whole lot of drama, and a whole lot of getting whooped over the head with consequences...she gets better eventually). In that view, Potiphar's wife (Zulaykha)'s chasing after Yusuf is literally her chasing after the divine. And boy does she want that man....depending on the reading he wanted her to but kept his cool- though he needed a little nudge to move away. Never lost that want though depending on the reading. Rumi's telling of her story blends the erotic and the divine to an almost scandalous degree- using romance and sensuality and love and mania as religious allegory. It's been a favorite tale in the east for nearly a millennia to tell all over Asia. At the same time, Ray integrating this with the classical understanding that the abrahamic god is well...beyond the need for sex alongside the idea of divine eroticisim is another thing I'm thinking about now. We know Chavez wants to induct him as an apprentice- and it's clear Chavez in his own way is devout- he didn't take kindly to Toddson's mockery. Chavez's chirstology and theological views were shown earlier with the saints- but I am intrigued to see if we'll see them explored further. And it's also clear that Chavez wants to keep Yousef away from the king- but why? The king seemed affable...mostly. The way I see it, for Chavez to be a cardinal means he knows his theology. Very well. So seeing that further explored is what I am interested in. We know Chavez sees service as a cardinal for all kinds- not just weres. At the same time, he does see weres as different from people- and that mondjugen must grow into being one. As for werewolf instability- while it makes sense they would be high strung and prone to conflict, it sometimes makes me wonder how they've also managed to infilitrate high levels of human society, be world leaders (Toddson's comment on Bush) and clearly manage technological infrastructures like the mondjugen searching app without combusting. If they were so unstable it's likely their enemies would have proxied their way through them- setting them against each other. If a werewolf can't wait even five minutes for revenge then well...it does make sense why they are constantly engaging in park chuckings of wolves, coups and other messes. But it also makes me wonder how their entire society hasn't well...collapsed yet in some massive conflict (like a civil war) that just completely wrecked them collectively. Or perhaps that already happened.... The mystery and complexity of werewolf politics is really how despite all their instability (seemingly in a perpetual warring states era style) they somehow survive without being overrun by their enemies. I suspect hunters can take advantage of this chaos really well.
3/25/25, 11:53 PM
A deeply intriguing chapter. The pack seems to be shattered, but is there a chance to regroup? Cardinal Chavez and King Ted do not seem to be on the same wavelength- Chavez doesn't want Ted to get his paws on Yousef. Why? What does Ted have planned for Yousef that he would find so objectionable. A long-awaited smackdown between Ruiz and the scheming Toddson- "I can't wait to see how *this turns out!"

3/26/25, 3:16 AM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) So much to get through in the three remaining chapters! Thank you for sticking with me!
3/26/25, 3:15 AM
still love this one.
3/25/25, 6:22 PM
Oh no! Bill and the pack are paying for his spell to trap Nando, aren’t they? The scene with Ray in prayer was both hot and moving. Love it all!

3/26/25, 3:12 AM
@[Furrybttm40](/user/show/10010813) I improved Ray’s prayers some, based on feedback. Give it a re-read. And there will be a lot more to come on that narrative thread in the next chapter. Cardinal Chavez will want to bring Ray further into the fold, but is Ray already ahead of him?