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5/22/22, 5:01 PM
This is the first time commenting on any of the stories that I have read on here. The story was absolutely amazing - exceptionally engaging and so incredibly well written. I could complete lose myself into the story, and felt empathy for Kyle and Ben. The pacing of the story kept me wanting to continue reading until I could finally finish the story. Upon finishing, I immediately looked to see what else you had written. I hope to read something new from you in the future. Absolutely first rate! Just as a side note, you were incredibly accurate with Kyle's clothing issues. I was "blessed" with the same issue in regards to butt and hips as Kyle's post transformation. Growing up, my grandma used to alter my clothes to get them to fit correctly. I have what is commonly known as birthing hips. For me to get pants to fight over my hips and bubble butt, the waist gaps terribly. I have actually never tried women's jeans, but have always joked about it.

5/24/22, 12:49 AM
@CatNoogie Comments like these are what make me want to write! Thank you so much for your kind words. As for other works of mine, I have one other published story that explores some related themes here. However, that comes with the caveat that it's a furry (and gender) based transformation story. I'm aware that that sort of thing is rather divisive and so I don't have it posted here as this isn't really the venue for such works. But I'm be happy to share a link if you, or others, are interested. In fact, you can find the link from my twitter, where I try to coordinate my various, but sparse, postings. https://twitter.com/LloydIrving10 Beyond that, I fear I'm a victim of too many interests and too little time. I have a lot of things in the works, but nothing ready for primetime. That being said, I collaborated extensively on Speedychopslover's recent story on here: https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/10001698 I'm not the primary author, but I think you'll find something to like there too. As for your side note, I'm glad my invented scenario matched well to a lived experience! I try to make things as realistic as I can (well as realistic as I can in the context of fantastical and impossible transformations), so I'm glad I got that detail right!
5/24/22, 12:07 AM
I’m so glad that people commented on this and brought it to my attention. It’s quite insightful (unsurprising, I knew Bracken was a sharp guy). It’s great food for thought and made me examine why I do basically hate certain stories that other people love. I’ve long since made my peace with the fact that some W.B. stories just don’t work for me because I will find them too mean, that being said, sometimes they’re just mean enough but also hot and so I find they work for me.
May 14, 2022
5/24/22, 12:01 AM
WOW! Absolutely incredible. You know exactly where to go and what to do. Loved it! Hope there will be more.
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5/24/22, 12:01 AM
The first chapter has been one of my favorites since you posted it. I’ve come back to it over and over. I’m so glad to see you continuing the story, can’t wait for even more!
5/23/22, 10:39 PM
Such a fantastic ending to a truly amazing story. Heartwarming to the nth degree, wonderfully silly and filled with love. A happy ending for all, and a secret for the future. A great corner of the Norismoverse I'll continue to explore.
5/23/22, 10:37 PM
I read the second part first because it was short and piqued my interest. Wound up having to read the whole thing. You did a fantastic job of keeping the story tight, fast moving and spare of word. It comes across as very well edited, or else you’re just a natural at distilling your stories down to horny thoughts/ideas and a minimum of plot to string them together in a way that works. This one gets a rare 5 scrolls from me for being so well written.
5/23/22, 10:27 PM
so glad you decided to follow up the original story! this chapter was super hot!
5/23/22, 9:58 PM
This was amazing!!! Of course, my favorite part, the out of nowhere turn: "He was going to murder his brother." The silliness of it all, the expected other twin that works street corners... Just all of it! This is the Norismo unleashed I love to read. On a separate note, cause it deserves it: Sushismo? I'm still laughing. This is so wonderfully silly and lovable! One crisis has been averted without needing to do anything but all the work is now there for the new crisis. Honestly, can't wait to keep reading.
5/23/22, 9:31 PM
Loving these moral men being made into absolutely horrible narcissists. The first chapter is a favorite and now this one is too. Eli is my faaaave. Love seeing the people he’d earned respect from previously being completely betrayed by him.
5/23/22, 8:47 PM
Loved this chapter even more than the first. Very hot!