Recent Comments

5/23/22, 11:32 AM
Fucking *astonished* that I missed this when it was published. Brilliant work!

5/23/22, 4:19 PM
Aw, I’m glad you finally saw it and got to read it! I’m incredibly proud of it, I don’t think I could have used 12k words better! (At least at this stage in my development as an author.) Thanks so much for the compliment. @Dace
Anonymous
5/23/22, 2:50 AM
I really like the reboot you’re doing of the series…. But I really want to know what happens next after this.. Please one more chapter of this version?… just so we can see daddy coach pound and soothe Luke’s itch with his fat cock?… Please?

SC Walker
5/23/22, 4:05 PM
Chapter 7 will be the remake of this story, and Chapter 8 will be the long awaited follow up! Chapter 8 will be posted on my Patreon :)
5/23/22, 3:37 PM
I used to believe I was the only fan Cavalier had. Of all the characters, he seemed the most universally disliked — and it can all be traced to this chapter and Cav’s “toxic masculinity”. Personally, I think AppleJack raping Red is a much worse crime, but I got so many reactions to Cav slapping AppleJack that I wondered if I had presented the story wrong. More, I think AppleJack’s storyline and development needed this moment. (Cav’s too). And by the end, everything has been worked out by all three.
Azuri Foxcoon
5/23/22, 3:35 PM
Beautiful story. Made me a lil chocked up at the end~ very well written. A fantasy I’m sure we all wish to be true.
5/23/22, 10:44 AM
Glad to see you continue this one! I'm not sure what will happen at all. Atlas isn't the most reliable narrator at this point, so will it go down as easily as he imagines?

5/23/22, 2:49 PM
@amul I'm toying with a few ideas for part 3, I guess we'll all be surprised :smile:
5/23/22, 2:23 PM
Thank you for continuing to write. Nobody else makes me cum as hard as you do
5/23/22, 7:08 AM
Some great ideas and imagery here, but I definitely get the sense this one was written in a hurry, which would account for some of the typos and leaps in character logic.

Tight Stories
5/23/22, 2:02 PM
@Hypnothrill it was a comission from a fan, so I was obligated to follow their plot and character stuff. But I agree its a bit quick yeah. Fair points made
Anonymous
5/23/22, 10:52 AM
I loved the original series so I’m so happy to see this back - poor Lee though, was hoping he’d pull through. Very happy to see Victor back too. His punishment in the first series was very hot. Great work!

5/23/22, 2:00 PM
@Anon TYSM! Loved your comment and glad you enjoyed the first season. Having Tyrell and Victor back as characters will be fun. Hope to see more of your thoughts on the new series as it goes on. Cheers!
Anonymous
5/23/22, 1:54 PM
Amazing!!! More Asian dom stories are needed. Always wanted to see a story where the Asian penis stereotype was flipped
R P
5/23/22, 1:53 PM
I love the sweet, tender, and very hot sex in this. Glad to see the underpants are going to share the love around between the three amigos ;)