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5/23/22, 12:13 AM
Thanks so much for posting this early! This seems like it will be an amazing series.
5/22/22, 11:38 PM
Great story! Please do not stop writing! I cant wait to read what comes next.
5/22/22, 11:20 PM
Someone needs to be a rubber master here, either James needs to become one or one needs to show up. 😂
R P
5/22/22, 10:33 PM
Damn, that was scorchingly hot! Loved seeing Butch change his boy. Would love to see more!
R P
5/22/22, 10:28 PM
This is such a sweet story with such a lovely end :)
5/22/22, 8:26 PM
In the end, this was an amazing chapter AND quite hot. The insidious way in which Atlas has been made to feel about injecting Gizmo and turning him, knowing there is no way he won't because it's his duty as a good father. Can't wait for chapter 3!

5/22/22, 10:16 PM
@Essex Thank you so much! I felt that it was definitely time to bring this story back.
5/22/22, 9:57 PM
I love the easy-going, natural sexuality that flows through this. As Heru said, no one has been made into an idiot, and that is a huge plus in my book. The "milk scene" read like something from an X-rated sitcom, and your world-building is as solid as ever. While incest isn't my bag of tricks, everything else in here surely is.
5/22/22, 9:16 PM
I'm going to talk about it more after the next chapter, but suffice to say that as the author, I felt that AppleJack was WAY out of line here, forcing himself on Red. Interestingly, people reacted more to AppleJack's punishment than his crime, which really surprised me. Of course, it's easy to make a case for the idea that the centaurs themselves give "roofies" in the form of their pheromones, thereby taking away the choice from their sexual target. So what AppleJack did to Red is no different from what the centaurs regularly do to humans. I am willing to buy into that line of thinking... ...but I still think AppleJack overstepped his boundary.
5/22/22, 7:48 PM
That was a hot chapter. I almost thought Stu was going to get carried away and transfer super powers into David and make him a super villain. The person you love the most changed to satisfy your sexual desires could destroy civilization and corrupt you in the end.

5/22/22, 8:48 PM
See, that's a deliciously tempting idea @TexMuscle, but not where I'm heading in this story. Although I think you might like what's coming up.
5/22/22, 4:50 PM
Great chapter! Glad we got some background on what made our super boy. Hope he and David are able to work through all the stress and difficulty. I think we need more detail on Patrick soon as right now he feels too much like an insufferable political consultant packaging up Stu for money (which I get is a goal so he can make a living) And after rescuing that insufferable woman maybe he needs a costume change that screams I'm gay you twat ;) Can't wait for the next part

5/22/22, 8:47 PM
Well @Stormbound, perhaps that's because Patrick is insufferable and I'm afraid he, much like a lot of the world, doesn't know how to handle having the world's only superhero as a client. In a world of image and brand consultants, he's really only interested in making Neutron a brand and keeping it profitable. Hoping for a happy ending for Stuart and David? Well; I won't spoil anything for you here in the comments!