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5/13/22, 8:17 PM
I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter of this!!

Cerebri Servus
5/23/22, 3:20 AM
@LatexPupAshe Thanks! Almost done with it. Just finished a second round of edits. I'll read it all through and check for small mistakes and then I'll post probably by the end of the week.
5/23/22, 3:05 AM
Honestly I really can’t wait to see jay fall under and ngl i’d love it if you make them all do stuff while they fall deeper under control
R P
5/23/22, 2:29 AM
This is really interesting, and it’s made me rethink why some stories really work or don’t work for me, despite being superficially similar. And I think that’s given me a better understanding of my own tastes. I understand why your self/others split is based on the more objective criteria of who the protagonist is, but as a reader I definitely care much more about that fuzzier idea of whether the character I identify with is changing or not. Being the protagonist is an important factor in that, of course, but I don’t think it’s the only one.
R P
5/20/22, 5:44 AM
This is so hot and well written. I love the slow burn as Jeremiah’s clothes get skimpier and sluttier :)

R P
5/20/22, 7:58 AM
Also, I kind of felt sorry for Rhoda at first, but as whatknife said it was just too funny when she started wearing a sack and joined a monastery.

5/23/22, 1:34 AM
@R P Thank you! And not to worry, I'm sure Rhoda is now just as spiritually fulfilled as Jeremiah is... otherwise fulfilled.
5/23/22, 12:30 AM
Another fantastic chapter, as usual. The move to roll back their individuality was particularly perverse and hot.
5/23/22, 12:13 AM
Thanks so much for posting this early! This seems like it will be an amazing series.
5/22/22, 11:38 PM
Great story! Please do not stop writing! I cant wait to read what comes next.
5/22/22, 11:20 PM
Someone needs to be a rubber master here, either James needs to become one or one needs to show up. 😂
R P
5/22/22, 10:33 PM
Damn, that was scorchingly hot! Loved seeing Butch change his boy. Would love to see more!
R P
5/22/22, 10:28 PM
This is such a sweet story with such a lovely end :)