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5/22/22, 8:01 PM
An absolutely wonderful ending and most of all, a well deserved ending for Xander who never thought he would ever get the happy ending. It's been a wonderful journey and Janus and Xander have been a treat to get to know as they got to know each other and fell in love. Thank you for a really wonderful story, Twan.
5/22/22, 7:50 PM
Hope there was a part 2 of this.
5/22/22, 7:45 PM
That was amazing. The world needs more asian dom stories like this
5/21/22, 11:56 PM
I hope part 2 comes soon

5/22/22, 7:04 PM
@darkblade2814 I'm still planning on writing the sequel (and I have a draft), but there are a lot of other stories on my plate at the moment, so I don't really have an estimate when it's coming out.

5/22/22, 7:07 PM
@bluesuedewho I see, good luck on all your stories
kuro
5/20/22, 8:58 PM
I've said it before and I'll say it again, but you're jostling for the top spot for 'most compelling erotic writer around' (along with Nutiper and some others, naturally). You've got a potent ability to put pen to paper and make _anything_ hot: case in point, I'm not a fan of DILFs, but your take on them is sizzling. The new dynamic it brought to Sam & Gabe's relationship (as well as Sam himself), and the way you explore the ramifications it has... well, frankly, I'd be extremely interested in seeing a more fleshed-out story from you that delves into that side of things. Perhaps flipping the concept, and exploring the butterfly effect of amending small things in a person's past? But I'm digressing! 5 stars across the board as usual. Well done!

5/22/22, 7:00 PM
@kuro Thanks for the compliments! Honestly, DILFs aren't really my thing either! It just made sense for the characters so I decided to have fun with the idea and put my spin on it. You can expect more reality-changing stuff from me in the future, including a few more chapters of this story.
Anonymous
5/8/22, 8:52 AM
Sooo hot, everytime I read these stories I picture Sam like this https://mobile.twitter.com/MateoBlancoXXX got the ass you describe perfectly. Already cant wait for the next chapter

5/22/22, 6:56 PM
@ Glad you're enjoying the story!
5/20/22, 11:01 PM
I thought I had commented around the competition, but I didn't. This is such a good one to revisit. Incredibly hot, and incredibly well-written. And also makes you think, because as others have commented, it's clearly a "happy ending for the reader" story, but there are elements of horror when taken out of context. It goes to show how powerful framing is -- the loving couple/POV character is happy at the end, and the villain character is upset, so it's a "good guys prevail" story, even if they don't go back to normal (which would obvi be a disappointment for this audience, lmfao). It's exactly the sort of stuff I come to these sites for, because I can be thinking all of that while jerking off to some hot porn. I mean, what else can I ask for?

5/22/22, 6:54 PM
@Razz TFs Oh, thanks! I didn't expect more comments on this one! I'm not one for didactic smut. Good things happening to good people and bad things happening to bad people gets boring. I just like writing about things happening to people! A bit of chaos makes the world go 'round.
5/22/22, 6:49 PM
Thanks for the suggestions, everybody! I've already started the next installment, but feel free to keep commenting. You can probably expect chapter 2 next weekend.
5/21/22, 10:01 AM
This is really interesting! Well-written as always and I like the part where his mind splits into two. Rusty is obnoxious of course, as he's supposed to be—I don't mind how rapey he is in the context of a story like this, nor do I feel like it's necessary for him to get comeuppance for his actions, but I do think it will be more enjoyable if he doesn't just straightforwardly get what he wants from the start. I guess I vote for Carter to change his stats in some way that would help him get an advantage in the next part.

5/22/22, 6:47 PM
@drummer Thanks for the compliments! This story is going to be more complicated than Rusty just getting everything he wants or a revenge fic!
5/20/22, 5:39 AM
Love this idea and so well written. Can't wait to see how it pans out. Really happy to see big sub/small top stuff on here. My vote would be change his stats.

5/22/22, 6:41 PM
@fanboi214 Thanks! This is my first time writing big sub/small top so hopefully it ends up working for people!