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5/22/22, 8:26 PM
In the end, this was an amazing chapter AND quite hot. The insidious way in which Atlas has been made to feel about injecting Gizmo and turning him, knowing there is no way he won't because it's his duty as a good father. Can't wait for chapter 3!

5/22/22, 10:16 PM
@Essex Thank you so much! I felt that it was definitely time to bring this story back.
5/22/22, 9:57 PM
I love the easy-going, natural sexuality that flows through this. As Heru said, no one has been made into an idiot, and that is a huge plus in my book. The "milk scene" read like something from an X-rated sitcom, and your world-building is as solid as ever. While incest isn't my bag of tricks, everything else in here surely is.
5/22/22, 9:16 PM
I'm going to talk about it more after the next chapter, but suffice to say that as the author, I felt that AppleJack was WAY out of line here, forcing himself on Red. Interestingly, people reacted more to AppleJack's punishment than his crime, which really surprised me. Of course, it's easy to make a case for the idea that the centaurs themselves give "roofies" in the form of their pheromones, thereby taking away the choice from their sexual target. So what AppleJack did to Red is no different from what the centaurs regularly do to humans. I am willing to buy into that line of thinking... ...but I still think AppleJack overstepped his boundary.
5/22/22, 7:48 PM
That was a hot chapter. I almost thought Stu was going to get carried away and transfer super powers into David and make him a super villain. The person you love the most changed to satisfy your sexual desires could destroy civilization and corrupt you in the end.

5/22/22, 8:48 PM
See, that's a deliciously tempting idea @TexMuscle, but not where I'm heading in this story. Although I think you might like what's coming up.
5/22/22, 4:50 PM
Great chapter! Glad we got some background on what made our super boy. Hope he and David are able to work through all the stress and difficulty. I think we need more detail on Patrick soon as right now he feels too much like an insufferable political consultant packaging up Stu for money (which I get is a goal so he can make a living) And after rescuing that insufferable woman maybe he needs a costume change that screams I'm gay you twat ;) Can't wait for the next part

5/22/22, 8:47 PM
Well @Stormbound, perhaps that's because Patrick is insufferable and I'm afraid he, much like a lot of the world, doesn't know how to handle having the world's only superhero as a client. In a world of image and brand consultants, he's really only interested in making Neutron a brand and keeping it profitable. Hoping for a happy ending for Stuart and David? Well; I won't spoil anything for you here in the comments!
5/22/22, 8:40 PM
Another great chapter! Loved the introduction of Ben and hope this is not the last of him. Hope to see what happens next soon.
5/22/22, 8:36 PM
Loving this story!
Arlo
5/22/22, 8:08 PM
I really teared up in the end, it was so beautiful
Evan
5/21/22, 1:27 PM
Catching up on this series and absolutely loving it. What an awesome chapter and quite a nice reveal. Poor Sam. I hope he can be happy.

5/22/22, 8:02 PM
@Evan Thank you Evan for the very kind words. Chapter 3 will be coming soon and we'll get to see where the next step in Sam's journey leads.
5/22/22, 8:01 PM
An absolutely wonderful ending and most of all, a well deserved ending for Xander who never thought he would ever get the happy ending. It's been a wonderful journey and Janus and Xander have been a treat to get to know as they got to know each other and fell in love. Thank you for a really wonderful story, Twan.