Recent Comments

5/20/22, 3:44 AM
Whoa, this hits the right buttons and I'm excited to see this continue! A bit iffy on the constant dumb jock comments and while I do want him to be one, hoping it's only that dumb jock other Carter to affect stud nerd Carter's thoughts. I'm voting for him to Confront Rusty and try to at least make consented changes or to make the changes enjoyable for his real self. EDIT : I also have a theory that as a Game Master, Rusty can add things to Carter and remove things he added, but not remove what's been set by Carter having followed the rules of character creation and the game itself setting things up like his Sewing 3 skill.

5/22/22, 6:40 PM
@ChronoSeth Thanks! The mechanics will be explained a bit more next chapter.
Anonymous
5/20/22, 3:40 AM
ooo i like this so far. hope rusty gets just as fucked up as he's dishing out lmao, altho ofc considering ur track record i'll probably enjoy anything you write. i say change his stats!

5/22/22, 6:40 PM
@ Thanks! It definitely won't be a straightforward journey for the characters!
5/20/22, 3:02 AM
Interesting. The idea of rpg made real is super fun and sexy.

5/22/22, 6:39 PM
@Heru Kane Thanks!
5/20/22, 2:36 AM
Having read a bunch of drafts of this, I’m really curious to see how and where it goes. It’s a really fun and hot setup and I really enjoyed both the characters.

5/22/22, 6:39 PM
@MonsterMash62 Thanks for help with editing and ideas! (And for commenting even when you're probably sick of seeing drafts :sweat_smile:)
Anonymous
5/22/22, 6:32 PM
Great chapter
Anonymous
5/22/22, 6:11 PM
So hot! It’ll be a long week before Friday…
Anonymous
5/22/22, 5:46 PM
:smiling_imp: Damn HOT! I wonder what DumDums milk tastes like, and what it might do for/to you when you drink it!?
Anonymous
5/22/22, 5:35 PM
Hot
Omar
5/22/22, 5:05 PM
I loved reading this story. I look forward to see what else you post
5/22/22, 4:59 PM
Can't wait for next Friday! More excited for it's (hoping) daddy will come to the picture ( even though I know Jonathan is next). But still the story is so hot!!!