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5/22/22, 1:08 PM
Loved it! I think variety and diversity keeps martial fresh. I was really into this ☺️
5/22/22, 12:43 PM
I’m excited to see Carter become one of the physically customized insatiable self-lubing fucksluts you write so well, I think what many other people are picking up on is that the story needs unresolved tension as the changes get wild and sexy. I like the idea of Carter and Rusty having power over changing each other with a level of not having proper control over their power to change. Make Carter into a dumb and ultra fuckable fat assed sex toy, but he’s desire to be a caster gives him some STRONG charm spells and power he can realy only even conceive of using to get plowed hard and treated like a slut. Give Rusty the experience he wants topping Carter but make it twisted in a way he finds he doesn’t enjoy being so much at someone else’s mercy in the kind of way he was happy to use Carter. Or reveal that Rusty’s weirder personality elements like an insistence on treating Carter like a dummy and an object are a result of someone ELSE already having edited Rusty with a sheet. As always love your writing!
5/22/22, 12:16 PM
Damn good story
5/22/22, 11:55 AM
too good
5/22/22, 11:51 AM
love this
5/22/22, 9:53 AM
So glad you're back EdIam :) Can't wait to find out how Steven gets mind fucked
5/22/22, 7:49 AM
I am so filled with sadness for the loneliness of Stu and the betrayal of David that it's painful to read thestory. Excellent job in manoepulating the characters and reader and please make this right!

5/22/22, 9:38 AM
@Stroppy Author Thank you, that is so kind! My aim here is to try to write something that feels relatively true to life - what I imagine would come up were it to happen to any one of us. David, Stuart, even Patrick are all flawed in some way and each have their own weaknesses, goals and motivations. I think if any one of us were to be Stuart; knowing you are, in almost every way, superior to everyone around you would make you feel incredibly isolated, not to mention the survivor's guilt you'd carry because of how you'd got your powers. I think it'd be hard to live with that when most people you meet would be too bamboozled into lust or jealousy with your physique or incredible powers to even consider that you might not want them, or that underneath the orange spandex, you're a person.
R P
5/22/22, 7:07 AM
I really loved this - it’s a super hot sex scene, and the relationship drama is deliciously tense. I’m not sure whether to root for them to sort out their issues as a couple, or for dom David to come out longer term 😍

5/22/22, 9:33 AM
Awww, thanks @R P! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wondered what people would feel about Stuart's actions towards David; changing his mind without his consent. To David, it's perfectly reasonable to see it as an intrusion, but to Stuart, it's just another 'thing' he can do. I guess every villain is the hero of their own story.
Anonymous
5/22/22, 8:18 AM
Definitely love to see Asian guys in control for a change. It kinda just stopped though - I would have liked a little more detail on how they're going to use him in their plan! Still, a decently sexy read. Well done!

5/22/22, 8:32 AM
Oh this one I intend to continue. It's just I have like a million ideas for where this could go, as the world slowly gets exposed to the formula bit by bit. So I just got myself to sit down and write enough of the introduction and scene-setting to feel like a coherent story first, so now I can write little vignettes when the mood strikes.

5/22/22, 8:47 AM
@AgainstMyWill omg you got me so excited for the future. Thanks for sharing your imagination and creativity with us!!
5/22/22, 6:18 AM
Really fantastic first story, currently my fav of the three that have been posted for the theme so far by anyone