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5/22/22, 2:24 PM
Now this was quite the nice start for a series!
5/22/22, 2:16 PM
Will you ever continue this?
5/21/22, 10:02 PM
Just submitted to release the next part a bit early. I shouldn't have left you all hanging with out some real fucked up shit going on first!! Hopefully that'll post by the end of the day today, but will release the sister part to that (from the perspective of one of the twins while they're being mind-fucked) next Friday. After that, I'll release the next chapter from Johannes' perspective and the sister chapter of the person he's taking control of every Friday after that :) So excited to have a fully realized story finally all done before submitting, making sure I don't leave you all completely hanging!

5/22/22, 1:39 PM
@EdIam well that's my jerking off for the next few weeks
5/22/22, 1:38 PM
Loved your story as usual
5/22/22, 1:25 PM
Just let it happen
5/22/22, 1:08 PM
Loved it! I think variety and diversity keeps martial fresh. I was really into this ☺️
5/22/22, 12:43 PM
I’m excited to see Carter become one of the physically customized insatiable self-lubing fucksluts you write so well, I think what many other people are picking up on is that the story needs unresolved tension as the changes get wild and sexy. I like the idea of Carter and Rusty having power over changing each other with a level of not having proper control over their power to change. Make Carter into a dumb and ultra fuckable fat assed sex toy, but he’s desire to be a caster gives him some STRONG charm spells and power he can realy only even conceive of using to get plowed hard and treated like a slut. Give Rusty the experience he wants topping Carter but make it twisted in a way he finds he doesn’t enjoy being so much at someone else’s mercy in the kind of way he was happy to use Carter. Or reveal that Rusty’s weirder personality elements like an insistence on treating Carter like a dummy and an object are a result of someone ELSE already having edited Rusty with a sheet. As always love your writing!
5/22/22, 12:16 PM
Damn good story
5/22/22, 11:55 AM
too good
5/22/22, 11:51 AM
love this