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5/22/22, 7:49 AM
I am so filled with sadness for the loneliness of Stu and the betrayal of David that it's painful to read thestory. Excellent job in manoepulating the characters and reader and please make this right!

5/22/22, 9:38 AM
@Stroppy Author Thank you, that is so kind! My aim here is to try to write something that feels relatively true to life - what I imagine would come up were it to happen to any one of us. David, Stuart, even Patrick are all flawed in some way and each have their own weaknesses, goals and motivations. I think if any one of us were to be Stuart; knowing you are, in almost every way, superior to everyone around you would make you feel incredibly isolated, not to mention the survivor's guilt you'd carry because of how you'd got your powers. I think it'd be hard to live with that when most people you meet would be too bamboozled into lust or jealousy with your physique or incredible powers to even consider that you might not want them, or that underneath the orange spandex, you're a person.
R P
5/22/22, 7:07 AM
I really loved this - it’s a super hot sex scene, and the relationship drama is deliciously tense. I’m not sure whether to root for them to sort out their issues as a couple, or for dom David to come out longer term 😍

5/22/22, 9:33 AM
Awww, thanks @R P! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wondered what people would feel about Stuart's actions towards David; changing his mind without his consent. To David, it's perfectly reasonable to see it as an intrusion, but to Stuart, it's just another 'thing' he can do. I guess every villain is the hero of their own story.
Anonymous
5/22/22, 8:18 AM
Definitely love to see Asian guys in control for a change. It kinda just stopped though - I would have liked a little more detail on how they're going to use him in their plan! Still, a decently sexy read. Well done!

5/22/22, 8:32 AM
Oh this one I intend to continue. It's just I have like a million ideas for where this could go, as the world slowly gets exposed to the formula bit by bit. So I just got myself to sit down and write enough of the introduction and scene-setting to feel like a coherent story first, so now I can write little vignettes when the mood strikes.

5/22/22, 8:47 AM
@AgainstMyWill omg you got me so excited for the future. Thanks for sharing your imagination and creativity with us!!
5/22/22, 6:18 AM
Really fantastic first story, currently my fav of the three that have been posted for the theme so far by anyone
5/22/22, 5:59 AM
Loved this so much and think itʻs a heavily neglected genre on here!
5/22/22, 5:47 AM
God DAMN am I glad you're back, that was hot as fuck!
5/22/22, 5:19 AM
Mercy me, this is a good one. Granted I’m not into incest, but the worldbuilding is fascinating! I love the little hints you drop about how things are happening, and how the entire U.S. is slowly getting worse. And as ever, there’s the brand of Hypnothrill commentary about propaganda: it’s a terrifying reminder that in a world where videos are EVERYWHERE (TikTok, video games, films, streaming services), it would be so easy to fall under a spell, even by accident…and it’s rather creepy how, even in these comments, people are so turned on by the sex that they think a world without free will is hot. :O That’s the seductive nature of it, I suppose…great work, Hypnothrill!
R P
5/22/22, 5:04 AM
Wow! This is so so hot. I may like it even more than your Donnie vs the Titans stuff, and I didn’t think that was possible. Dom Tim is just so much fun with slutty Conner. Particularly loved this line “real beauty…it wasn’t to just be seen…it was to be used…used until it couldn’t be enjoyed any more.” 🔥
5/22/22, 5:02 AM
You don't have any idea how happy this makes me. I'm a big fan of your stories!!!
5/22/22, 2:32 AM
This is a reality I could get behind! Very curious what the Master is doing with the wives, mothers, and girlfriends...:P