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muscle. poppers
5/21/22, 6:37 PM
Can't wait for the next chapter!
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
5/21/22, 6:29 PM
Damn! So many of us wish such a transformation was actually possible!
5/21/22, 6:09 PM
It's most obvious in this chapter. In a perfect world, the text messages would look like text messages, in their little balloons. And the Magic Realm sections of the story would have their own font and would look, in my mind's eye, as if they were an ancient storybook. I indicate it with italics, but I'd really like to see it go that extra step.
5/21/22, 5:29 PM
Hot transformation. Glad he got made an alpha by his friend to help him protect against being converted, though he'd already managed to do so earlier in the process. Hope a stocky muscled wrestler bro who likes to wear singlets is next!
May 17, 2022
5/21/22, 5:16 PM
Great start! Need to find out more about this mysterious figure and the injured slave! Like how interested in the hot slaves Operator 297 is as well, wonder what impact that might have on events to come
5/21/22, 5:04 PM
This story just keeps getting better and better! Can't wait to see what happens once Gabriel is in his new suit! The halfling transformation was a great twist in between and loved the whole self fuck programming mode
5/21/22, 4:54 PM
Yay! First Edlam story in almost a year. I'm sure it will be worth the wait as always. Love the setup in these 2 chapters and can't wait until we get the next installment.
5/21/22, 4:02 PM
Amazing... I really hope there's more!
R P
5/21/22, 3:37 PM
Damn this is hot. Love the rough but still tender first time with Ben :)
R P
5/21/22, 3:28 PM
Hot! I’d love to see that pup about a bone too 😈