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5/20/22, 10:43 AM
Really hoping to see Carter turn the tables on Rusty, because he seems like a chill dude I'd love to hang with and Rusty is ruining a perfectly hot fantasy with his obnoxious personality. I mean, I get the whole appeal of a mind control kink is changing people and watching them change, but I just have a fundamental visceral aversion to seeing somebody who is THIS much of an asshole get to have things their way.

5/20/22, 11:28 AM
@goodbiforever Amen to this. Eventually I stop being interested in the story because I hate the character so much that it’s no longer fun to read. Granted, it’s a testament to the author’s skill that he can write characters that get such strong reactions! :)

R P
5/20/22, 12:33 PM
@goodbiforever I completely agree! Would love to see Carter confront Rusty and turn him into the exact kind of dumb jock he’s been trying to turn Carter into. If Carter becomes a bit more bi/gay along the way, that’s just gravy :D

Buckyboi
5/20/22, 4:04 PM
@goodbiforever Ditto to this entire thread!

5/20/22, 8:19 PM
@R P that would be sweet delicious karma

R P
5/20/22, 10:17 PM
On rereading I just wanted to add that this first chapter has a hot concept, and is super well written, so definitely keen to read more! I’d just like to see Rusty get some comeuppance as well.
Anonymous
5/20/22, 9:31 PM
You write best with non consensual and sometimes cruel transformation - the Tyler chapter of your other work. In my opinion of course! I'd love to see some more noncon changes, perhaps SPH or feminisation (though I don't think you've ever written any to be fair)
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
5/20/22, 8:57 PM
Perfect ending. I like when the protagonist is kept in his new personality rather than stories which ables him to escape. If he is happy with what he has become, why take all that away from him?

5/20/22, 9:10 PM
@slavethruhypno@yahoo.com, how could he not be “happy” when he has everything that the Interactive has determined makes people happy… thank you for your kind comments over the past week, I hope you enjoyed the story
Martin
5/20/22, 9:09 PM
Amazing!
5/20/22, 9:08 PM
Keep going. Your daily release is quite satisfying. Looking forward to the next one you pump out.
5/20/22, 7:26 PM
I am really impressed with how fast you are getting these chapters out. At the start of this one, I thought that Gab would take control of James. Now it seems both are bound to be rubber toys. Will one be in charge or will they both maintain their personality?

felix
5/20/22, 9:01 PM
@Marik29 Thanks! Once I get in a mode of writing, everything kinda lays out in my head at the start. So it's really just a matter of transcribing my ideas while also keeping my hand off my dick, lol. And we'll just have to see about that second part... ;)
5/20/22, 8:50 PM
One of my favourite stories on this site. Love the way you stretch out the transformation and describe the “in between” parts. I’m also loving the back and forth between mindlessness and awareness. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
5/20/22, 8:30 PM
Hot! Wish it was drawn out a bit longer... And/or more detailed sex scenes and sexual transformations.
May 19, 2022
Anonymous
5/20/22, 11:19 AM
Why are these protags so easy to drag into signing a contract without having a lawyer review it first? I mean, I get it, deal with the devil and all, but I've always been of the mindset that the best way to beat a devil of detail is to bring a decent lawyer to the game. Oh, now I'm getting ideas for how you can have Peter get buyer's remorse and ask a lawyer for help with finding a loophole or exit clause. Of course, they say that law's one DEVIL of a profession, so why not turn it into spiritual litigation?

5/20/22, 8:10 PM
Hahaha well if they read the contract like a normal person, the story wouldn’t be interesting eh 😜 thanks for the comment! Hope you enjoyed the story <3

Anonymous
5/20/22, 8:16 PM
@Grant Spiral Rest assured, this only means you get to make things interesting for him after the fact! Imagine having Peter ask the company's in-house counsel to help with the contract, only for him to get a lecture on "I represent the company, not you, and if I help you with this I could be disbarred." Then he has to find HIS OWN LAWYER, maybe one of the guys who fucks him on a recurring basis in his new life, and wouldn't ya know it, he just happens to practice employment and labor law and represent employees! Maybe work a bit of "alternative payment methods" in there, and you could set up quite the dramatic confrontation between Peter and Hendrick as they fight over which laws should control his life!
5/20/22, 8:12 PM
Gotta say, this is a thoroughly underappreciated story. I consider this an absolute classic already.