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5/20/22, 11:47 PM
VERY Hot story, I loved it the whole way through, I hope there's more coming, I'd love to read what happened to Finn.
5/20/22, 10:23 PM
Oh, I'm liking this very much. I think Carter should just let it happen.
5/20/22, 10:43 AM
Really hoping to see Carter turn the tables on Rusty, because he seems like a chill dude I'd love to hang with and Rusty is ruining a perfectly hot fantasy with his obnoxious personality. I mean, I get the whole appeal of a mind control kink is changing people and watching them change, but I just have a fundamental visceral aversion to seeing somebody who is THIS much of an asshole get to have things their way.

5/20/22, 11:28 AM
@goodbiforever Amen to this. Eventually I stop being interested in the story because I hate the character so much that it’s no longer fun to read. Granted, it’s a testament to the author’s skill that he can write characters that get such strong reactions! :)

R P
5/20/22, 12:33 PM
@goodbiforever I completely agree! Would love to see Carter confront Rusty and turn him into the exact kind of dumb jock he’s been trying to turn Carter into. If Carter becomes a bit more bi/gay along the way, that’s just gravy :D

Buckyboi
5/20/22, 4:04 PM
@goodbiforever Ditto to this entire thread!

5/20/22, 8:19 PM
@R P that would be sweet delicious karma

R P
5/20/22, 10:17 PM
On rereading I just wanted to add that this first chapter has a hot concept, and is super well written, so definitely keen to read more! I’d just like to see Rusty get some comeuppance as well.
Anonymous
5/20/22, 9:31 PM
You write best with non consensual and sometimes cruel transformation - the Tyler chapter of your other work. In my opinion of course! I'd love to see some more noncon changes, perhaps SPH or feminisation (though I don't think you've ever written any to be fair)
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
5/20/22, 8:57 PM
Perfect ending. I like when the protagonist is kept in his new personality rather than stories which ables him to escape. If he is happy with what he has become, why take all that away from him?

5/20/22, 9:10 PM
@slavethruhypno@yahoo.com, how could he not be “happy” when he has everything that the Interactive has determined makes people happy… thank you for your kind comments over the past week, I hope you enjoyed the story
Martin
5/20/22, 9:09 PM
Amazing!
5/20/22, 9:08 PM
Keep going. Your daily release is quite satisfying. Looking forward to the next one you pump out.
5/20/22, 7:26 PM
I am really impressed with how fast you are getting these chapters out. At the start of this one, I thought that Gab would take control of James. Now it seems both are bound to be rubber toys. Will one be in charge or will they both maintain their personality?

felix
5/20/22, 9:01 PM
@Marik29 Thanks! Once I get in a mode of writing, everything kinda lays out in my head at the start. So it's really just a matter of transcribing my ideas while also keeping my hand off my dick, lol. And we'll just have to see about that second part... ;)
5/20/22, 8:50 PM
One of my favourite stories on this site. Love the way you stretch out the transformation and describe the “in between” parts. I’m also loving the back and forth between mindlessness and awareness. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
5/20/22, 8:30 PM
Hot! Wish it was drawn out a bit longer... And/or more detailed sex scenes and sexual transformations.