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5/20/22, 11:30 AM
Really enjoy that story!! Personnally I'd love to see Jay resisting a fair bit when Ian tries to subdue him.
5/19/22, 11:35 PM
I guess confront rusty or run seem like the best. This is a cool looking series, I hope you continue the wholesome super villain one!

5/20/22, 1:44 AM
@Botbot Thanks! I have some note scribbled down for that one.

5/20/22, 11:20 AM
@bluesuedewho cool! I'm excited to read more :)
5/20/22, 11:14 AM
The scene where AppleJack and Pokey meet is one of my favorite moments in the book. The "I hate this kid" line cracks me up. This brings up an interesting bit with their names. At first, I considered using names of centaurs from myth (there are easily two or three dozen cited in the ancient texts), but then I thought it would be more fun to use modern-day, goofy horse names for them. Then it became a matter of justifying their names in backstory. (It was my intent to use Pokey's last name "Dakota" when the centaurs achieved their "Bestial" Forms -- see chapter 5 -- in an effort to be more "formal") But Pokey is not to be stopped. Anyway, for "AppleJack" I longed considered "Oatmeal" and (as readers of CENTAUROMACHY can attest:) "Graham Cracker"
5/20/22, 9:54 AM
Haha thanks guys keep me posted on what you want to see next. Next chapter won’t be released until Monday night probably.

5/20/22, 10:43 AM
@Anyonka i really am enjoying your story, fuck its so erotic to take someones bkyfriend away, it would be nicer to see ian start to make jay feel jealous, make collin slutty around ian and make him a little aloft from jay. Eitherway i really do enjoy the story and i am looking forward for the next chapter.
5/20/22, 10:23 AM
FUCKING AWESOME WRITING. Carry on!
5/20/22, 9:22 AM
My god that was hot. Nothing hotter than brainwashing someone's boyfriend ☺
5/20/22, 8:51 AM
Fantastic continuation. What about those twins though?
Jockmorphr
5/20/22, 6:25 AM
I really enjoyed this story @MstGay3000. Especially the way the jocks were completely incapacitated by the laughing gas. The idea of the large, muscular men becoming powerless from laughter was really hot. I’d love to see more from Captain Laughing Gas!

5/20/22, 7:04 AM
@Jockmorphr thanks jockmorphr, glad you enjoyed it!
LucasT
5/20/22, 6:28 AM
Great story! Thanx for this 2nd part :)
Subboy-00
5/20/22, 6:04 AM
Change his stats