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5/19/22, 4:08 AM
What a beautifully tragic story. It’s a reminder of the costs that come with being a hero—like that Five for Fighting song “Superman.”

5/19/22, 4:59 PM
@Feed Your Head he's more than a bird, he's more than a plane... he's a mess. But seriously, I always imagined that a superhero in our reality wouldn't have an easy ride, Neutron/Stuart are going to have a bumpy one. Thanks for your comment!
felix
5/18/22, 11:10 PM
This was an interesting and hot read. Looking forward to what'll happen next

5/19/22, 4:57 PM
Thanks @felix! I hope to impress, though I'm not sure some people will like where this is heading.
5/19/22, 4:37 PM
Thanks for this story. A fun fantasy story and well told. Really enjoyed that.
5/19/22, 10:33 AM
Some trivia from this chapter: the doctor’s offices are my IRL doctor’s offices. A huge theatre fan, his offices are littered with posters and programs and merch. It’s a gay wonderland. I told him i used his offices in the book and he bought a copy, which now sits amongst his other crap. Very proud.
5/18/22, 12:19 PM
Hello, all! Now that I'm posting the entire novel here on GSS, I replaced the "teaser" with Chapter One. One bit of Chapter One Trivia that may interest the writers among us. The scene between Red and his mother at the funeral was the very last thing I wrote in the novel. Late in the second draft, I decided that the exposition needed to slow down a hair more. And my editor (@BearParadox) had brought up in a discussion that throughout the 2 years this novel spans, we never meet Red's parents. So I created the little funeral scene between Red and his mother to show how strained their relationship was, creating a reason for him never to see them. In the second novel, CENTAUROMACHY, Red and his parents meet in the first chapter and his explanation for his transformation serves as the exposition for the book.

Martin
5/19/22, 5:42 AM
@absman420 I will remove the sponsored stor tag then, ok? The series will be moved back to the top of the list as you add the next chapter. You might want to add a note in the series summary that this will be the complete book. P.s. i just saw that you already did that... never mind

5/19/22, 10:29 AM
@Martin Thank you Martin. All love.
R P
5/19/22, 9:57 AM
Love seeing the brothers get closer together, they have such a sweet and hot relationship dynamic!
5/19/22, 9:17 AM
This was fucking amazing. Really loved the transformation from human to human-like object, which is what James is now. Thanks for this one.
5/19/22, 9:15 AM
is there gonna be more?
5/19/22, 9:13 AM
This is very _very_ good. I agree, exposition can be quite overrated, but you can set it up in a paragraph, maybe two, and get right to it in the same way. Starting is always the hardest part isn't it?
LucasT
5/19/22, 5:03 AM
Great story. I would like to know what other accessories there are in that chest. And to further proceed with James Transformation in this sex drone :D