Recent Comments

3/25/25, 11:03 PM
so evil so perfect..more please
Anon
3/25/25, 10:48 PM
This is an interesting premise. One form of power replacing another. I think what I felt the worst over was Zach. While he had engaged in adultery he legitimately needed help. He's happy now but uhh...this may not have been ideal. Though the two had agreed on this. On the other hand many of the other transformed men seemed to have been quite lackluster. And well...that girlfriend of his learned her lesson far too late. At least she did realize she messed up- if far too late It seems a pattern that the last woman in each chapter realizes they are merely perpetuating what they sought to abolish. The story itself shows great transition of the forms of the men. I wonder what the future for Zach is...and his now former girlfriend. The bears idea is fascinating. Perhaps it's used as a means by which to address men with issues with anger and rage? Though...at the rate this is going does the matriarchy have a backup plan in case this method of theirs runs wild? Such would mean lack of reproduction and probable extinction I'd imagine.
3/25/25, 10:45 PM
damn this was hot and fuck yeah I joined your telegram
Mar 24, 2025
3/25/25, 10:25 PM
any time Superman gives into lust...then I join him....nice start....
3/25/25, 9:24 PM
Dawm that was nice. Wonder what else changed
3/25/25, 4:29 PM
This was what I’d been waiting for since this whole story began. Henry and Nick. Together again and now they can save the others and end this!

3/25/25, 8:49 PM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) They both deserve a break, I guess ;) I wonder if Joe and Lee can pick up some of the slack,...?

3/25/25, 9:20 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Hopefully they all get out of this mess they are all in. Nick and Henry probably want Lee back. Especially Nick!
3/25/25, 6:05 PM
You're finally free of Nick's horribly erotic and simultaneously self-deprecating mental chains! The scene where Henry gives in to momentary temptation was also very erotic. and also, maybe Henry can have some fun with the drones he has left over after his drone war with Hank?

3/25/25, 8:52 PM
@[EROEGOENDO](/user/show/10046775) Thank you! Henry is, and always has been, a very kinky little hero (even if he didn't know it before Nick). I'm very glad to hear you enjoyed him flirting with temptation,... and who knows how far he'll go to keep up appearances? We'll have to see!
3/25/25, 8:46 PM
This is so well written! Absolutely exceptional stuff – I hope there's more coming! Love the way you split the scenes and your writing style is really vivid! Thank you!
J.J.
3/25/25, 8:14 PM
Perfect!
3/25/25, 6:53 PM
I wonder how much more twisted, erotic and powerful his play will become!

3/25/25, 7:10 PM
@[EROEGOENDO](/user/show/10046775) Thanks for reading my series despite it was ai assisted but the storyline is my idea... English is not my first language so I need an ai assistant to make an erotic story hope you like the next chapters....