Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/25/25, 7:02 AM
Please please please add another few chapters. I've read a lot of stories but none have made me this excited or on edge. I was constantly reading more and more. You are clearly an amazing writer. Keep up the good work. And I beg please wrote more this series. I think this is my new favorite!
3/25/25, 6:31 AM
Congratulations! In my heart you are the champion!
3/24/25, 10:27 PM
A great story, hopefully there's a follow up?

3/25/25, 5:34 AM
@[fredtaylor](/user/show/988150) It seems pretty self-contained. What else would you like to see happen?
Jose
3/25/25, 5:07 AM
This is so good bro! Any reference pics for what Tommy's dad looks like?
Anonymous
3/22/25, 1:53 AM
Great star… I love this kind of stories… please keep going

3/25/25, 4:39 AM
@Anonymous I will thanks....there's a new chapter a little bit long.... for approval by admin...
3/25/25, 4:28 AM
Really nice story and well written i enjoy the welcome on the squad and the interaction between units hope more parts come in future if these are planned :D
3/25/25, 4:27 AM
What an awesome premise! Love your work AnonDog
Muscle-Flex
3/25/25, 4:25 AM
Oh man, two parts in and this story is phenomenal! The words - so carefully chosen to create subtle sensations, just like Vale's words to the guys in the office. Really excellent!
3/25/25, 2:24 AM
Nicely written.

3/25/25, 3:53 AM
@[blankbot](/user/show/1247965) They used AI so not really
Arthur
3/25/25, 1:24 AM
You should definitely continue this! I'm loving these characters and the scenario. You've really got a fun and sexy storyline here!