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Anonymous
5/17/22, 2:45 AM
This was hot! I really like the direction you’re going with this… I’m also really looking forward to the coach being introduced ;) Maybe Luke turns to him for advice in the next chapter?

SC Walker
5/17/22, 6:08 PM
Coach is coming up soon! Not in the next chapter but after that. ;)
Anonymous
5/17/22, 5:05 PM
I liked it, but I think you should give more details about how his penis shrinks, I also think it would be better if he gains weight after giving part of his penis🍆🔜🍌🔜🍤
5/17/22, 4:38 PM
I love the way this is going, hope to see another ipdate soon!
5/17/22, 3:26 PM
Would love to see more stories especially of doc and the boss
May 17, 2022
5/17/22, 3:14 AM
I want more please

5/17/22, 1:39 PM
@Waffleeater51 This is actually the mirror of a scene in a longer piece about the character who called into the abuse tip line. It's not exactly spoilerish to say his name (H-6073) or that he's _my_ character in the kinky RPG that a few of us on this server play. While writing that longer piece, I got enamored with how Operator 297 must interpret the events as a "normal" citizen of Korvosa. I'm still working on that work, but as a scene, this had been more or less ready for months, so I figured "why not."
5/17/22, 4:24 AM
I haven’t even got that far into this chapter and I have to say: the details about him feeling naughty when getting up on the bed…absolute gold.

5/17/22, 12:28 PM
While I was a little hesitant to start this one because of my disdain for cops, I have no regrets. I love this. I can’t wait for Lucky to truly accept his new place.
5/17/22, 12:00 PM
nice job at the story and everything hope you continue it
5/17/22, 11:36 AM
This was incredibly hot. Love the gaping/fisting prep angle which I’ve never seen in an mpreg story before.
5/17/22, 11:31 AM
Omg this is so hot!!! I love it!!
4/11/22, 12:15 PM
I apologize that it took a while to get this chapter published. When I wrote Heat's 2nd chapter, I had a clear idea for the 3rd and final chapter. It would be all about Fresh Meat, his backstory and how he ended up in the sauna. But when I tried to write it, the story just kept falling apart. I tried over and over, with the same disastrous results. A couple days ago, I decided to turn my attention to the gym owner. And suddenly, the story began to flow. And now, chapter 3 is here. I don't now if there will be a fourth chapter. But I wanted to end it with the possibility. Think of it like a Marvel movie's post-credit stinger.

5/17/22, 11:12 AM
@rubbrsome frank and officer will not be satisfied until there is another chapter, just saying, incredible