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5/16/22, 11:31 PM
Glad to see an mpreg story. Thanks for sharing.
5/16/22, 11:20 PM
I love just how unaware he remains and how they're manipulating his emotions through Bryce as well.
5/16/22, 10:42 PM
perfect set up for a man to become a she-whore who needs to be bred and transformed. Good job
5/16/22, 10:40 PM
Fucking awesome story! Can’t wait to read more, with Chad taking more and more control no matter how much Steven struggles to free himself! So hot seeing him effortlessly fall under Chad’s jock spell
Martin
5/16/22, 7:54 PM
Fuck, what an amazing story! It was too hot to be true. The only regret I'd have as Juan or any of the drones is that they don't remember their drone time. For me this would be the ultimate reward... As it is, they don't really get to enjoy the orgasms that are granted to them, not even in retrospect. But please go on writing more stories like this!

5/16/22, 9:28 PM
@Martin thanks for the compliment, I like your work as well. Maybe memories might be an option, we’ll see where the next bits take it
5/16/22, 1:32 PM
While the story line was a bit convoluted, I found myself sticking with it because you got me interested in the characters themselves. This story stinks, and I mean that in the best possible way. Hypper, you've concocted a medley of odors and textures that drew me into the story in a personal way. The shared jocks, rubber and pissing assistance are powerful details. Although you took me into a dark world, there is also kind of a nice "ethic" that emerges on the part of Owner. He comes across as a lover, rather than just a sadist. You see this in odd ways.... like the annual "wake up" call where consent is reaffirmed ..... the correcting that the next wake up is not in 9.5 years, but in a year -- Owner is not going to take advantage of his charge .... Owner even makes sure that the drone's are staying current with their filings with the IRS. Odd details that give us some insight into the Owner/ownee dynamic that is strange but respectful. It appears that this is your first posting, and if it is indeed, you've come out of the gate charging ahead of the pack. Good job, Boi.

5/16/22, 9:01 PM
@Body Odor thanks for your comment. The stories get started during online meetings and written in bits and pieces. When all the blood has rushed elsewhere because what I'm writing about is so hot, the brain gets a little scattered hehe. I'll likely edit subsequent things a bit closer and on a laptop. Editing on iPhone only shows a 2 inch swath of text and I think it invites continuity errors. And yes, I unapologetically put my love for man scent into it. When I play IRL using hypnosis the best sessions are with the really piggy guys. When they show up with ripe pits in their workout jock I know it's going to be a good time. A lot of the small rules the drones in the story follow are fairly easy hypnotic suggestions to reinforce, although the degree of control with hypno is far less than Owner has. Yes this is the first thing I've written on here. I have a story or two on malebots dot com under the same author name. And I have Owner treat his subs the way I like to treat mine: I have mad respect for submissive guys who aren't inhibited about asking for what they need.
fry
5/16/22, 7:58 PM
Hello Brian?? Your adoring fans would like to know if you have any more chapters to this story.
5/16/22, 3:43 AM
Excellent stuff! I love how EVERYTHING in town is designed to aid in the brainwashing: the television, the work stations, the Chinese food, even the hold music…very clever, and it gives an air of menace (you can’t escape). And it’s fun to see how easily the protagonist is falling under the spell, already calling Bryce his “buddy.” It’s dangerous to be happy… ;)

5/16/22, 7:06 PM
@Feed Your Head, is that it? Or is it that happiness is an illusion? My actual basis for the story was the old saying, “The devil often comes to you as everything you’ve ever wanted..,”
5/16/22, 3:13 AM
Happy to see you back in the writing game and doing good stuff!!! Looking forward to seeing where you go with this story!!

5/16/22, 7:04 PM
@New Guy in Town thanks! Lots of things have been going on that have kind of zapped the creative juices, but this story concept came to me and it was too good to resist!
5/15/22, 11:57 PM
So hot! Such a good concept and slow burn. Can’t wait to see how the drone transformation ends 😍

5/16/22, 7:03 PM
@SuitUp thank you… hope you’ll be happy with the ending!